Wow, that ending was awesome. You did such a wonderful job!

I LOVED IT! SAD ITS OVER, BUT VERY PLEASE WITH THE EPI!

great story :)))))

Perfect, I love it!

Great work, love! I'm glad the story is ending on a hopeful note, full of possibilities... Thank you for sharing this with us!

Thanks so much for sharing this story with us and sticking with it! It was great to see them being so happy this far down the road. Bella went through so much in this story, but it looks like she's done amazingly well and I love that they have been able to create such a happy life.

So, I feel like kind of a dork for always leaving such gushy, lengthy, over-the-top reviews. I think I'll just keep it short and sweet this time. Thank you SO much for an amazing chapter and an amazing story. I will always be your devoted reader for life! Best of luck to you in all of your future endeavors. ILY!

I really appreciate that you've kept this chapter as close to a real experience as possible. Including titles of real books and how you wrote Angela really adds to the reader being able to visualize this chapter and experience the story.

I really enjoyed this story- it was very well written and developed. I can't wait to read ur next story, good luck x

I really have enjoyed this story. I like that Bella wasn't perfect and had to fight a lot, but overcame it in the end. I love that Edward and Bella have a child, but I am slightly confused-I am hoping and assuming they got married, but would have liked to have seen that confirmed. Other than that, this has been a great read. I've got you on author alert and I love Chain Reaction, that's one I love seeing updates for in my inbox. Thanks for sharing your work! It rocks!

Beautiful ending. I love that you didn't make everything perfect. That Bella realistically still has some struggles. I loved Edward's conversation with his daughter in the kitchen. So sweet. This is a great story. :)

Well I so happy Bella is home safe and really seems to be at peace with herself finally. She has come a long way as they both have. I'm thrilled how Edward stood by her through it all and now life can begin again for the two of them. This has been an amazingly different story from what I usually read but I've enjoyed every minute of it. I look forward to the epilogue to see where life has taken them. :)

I have enjoyed your story more than I can tell you. Thank you so much for every word.

xoxo

Beautiful job, love! And I love that it had a beautiful, hopeful ending!

She really has come a long way. I love how she left the unfinished scarf and ball of yarn. I'm glad she realizes that Charlie is not good for her. I love, love, love, that she is happy to be home and it feels right. Enjoyed it.