Reviews for The Ritual
divyvicki chapter 26 . 3/22/2012
Great story but would have loved more about Bella and Edward's journey to where they were after 3 years instead of the repeatative lemon in the last chapter. Just my opinion.
divyvicki chapter 16 . 3/17/2012
How interesting that U've done clinical trials. I also worked in that area for 12 years. Very interesting chapter. I can't remember, Is Charlie still alive and Bella just doesn't see him or is he dead as well?
divyvicki chapter 15 . 3/17/2012
Thought Bella was going to remember Emmett there for a minute. Way to keep the suspense going.
divyvicki chapter 13 . 3/15/2012
I'm still sure that Edward not telling Bella he knew about Phoenix is going to come back to haunt their relationship.
divyvicki chapter 12 . 3/15/2012
So sad but expected that she would relapse. Hope Edward is honest with her. It will probably help her to know that he already knows what happened but loves her anyway.
divyvicki chapter 10 . 3/14/2012
I'm afraid that Edward is going to regret not telling Bella. Secrets have a way of coming out.
divyvicki chapter 5 . 3/4/2012
Love stories where James is the bad guy. Lol. Thanks for some insight into why Bella is drinking. I feel bad about the drinks she had before going to see Rose and Emmett. I'm afraid that's not going to go well. Anxious to see how the AA meeting goes.
divyvicki chapter 3 . 2/29/2012
There is a very old very sad black and white movie called "Madame X". It talks about absinthe addiction. Great chapter. Easy to understand why Bella is so fragile.
athome Jo chapter 26 . 2/3/2012
This story was fantastic! Thank you for sharing it with us ;)
athome Jo chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
I'm loving The Ritual! Do you have a banner or any pics to go along with this fic? I'm so visual, I love them. If so, I'd love to see ;)
hh3rob chapter 4 . 1/25/2012
4 chapters in and im hooked! i kept hearing good things abt it so i had to bump it up on my "tbr" list ;)
Jhere chapter 26 . 10/31/2011
Woah, what a ride :) Read it from start to finish non stop. I couldn't get enough! Your Bella and Edward just pulled me in, flaws and all. I've loved every minute of this story ;) Every mess up and break up and every make up. I'm a big sap at heart...if you couldn't tell.

This story has been on my 'To Read' list for forever and the only thing I regret is not reading it sooner. I don't know why I waited this long.

Btw, I loved the way you described Edward's eyes as cat like ;) I've always thought about them that way but I've never heard them referred to as that in any other story unil this one. I fell in love with this Edward and Bella. Yes, even her alcoholic ass ;)

Alice and Jasper were in a close second for my favorite chacters by the way. I loved your Alice.

Also all through the epi I was wondering if there was a baby...or if we were gonna find out about a pregnacy...I was losing hope until the end. It was such a wonderful surprise. I loved it. A little Renee. I don't doubt her first word is going to be a...bad one. It was the perfect ending for such an amazing story. Not to mention a heated work out was nicely added :D

Thanks for sharing it with us! I loved every minute of this roller coaster.
Pates Greeneyes chapter 26 . 10/14/2011
Great story ending! Are they married? Did I miss that?
Pates Greeneyes chapter 18 . 10/14/2011
Yes I teared up:( my heart


Pates Greeneyes chapter 12 . 10/13/2011
my heart breaks!
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