| Reviews for The Ritual |
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   PianoAddict246 chapter 1 . 3/22/2009 This story sounds like it could be really good. This chapter was sweet even though it's so sad and it's so cute that Edward cares about her so much even before he's met her. You should continue though. And I thought you did pretty well on the lemon. PianoAddict246 |
| phoenixhunter47 chapter 1 . 3/22/2009 OMG! Consider my panties blown off! Fantastic lemon. You should absolutely continue this story. I want to know what Bella's issues are and why she has them? Why Edward feels compelled to save her? What happens the morning after? How does their relationship move on from here? Who is Edward? and who is Bella? Who are they as people? What di they do - what do their lives consist of? Too many questions - I need answers. And I wouldn't say no to more lemons like that one... |
| Chalger chapter 1 . 3/22/2009 Great premise, i am looking forward to where you take this...please update soon |
| australianvamp chapter 1 . 3/22/2009 please continue... that lemon was HOT your writing is amazing and you will be doing a service to everyone by continuing this story |
| XxRachellexX chapter 1 . 3/22/2009 please keep going. i love it so far. |
| slimjimjerky chapter 1 . 3/21/2009 that was great! i really hope you continue! haha this made me laugh, "so tell me if it sucked or if it blew your panties off." LOL |
| BelleinWonderland chapter 1 . 3/21/2009 WOW!...That was an encredible LEMON!:]You simply must continue this update soon:]Thank you. |