|Reviews for Secret Language: The Kiss|
| lilyflower666 chapter 6 . 7/23/2013
Wow, this story was intense and amazing. Kind of gave me a whole new out look of how to write kissing scenes. No more suction cups, instead small kisses leading out as many. Yeah, I can definitely see how that is not only more intense but more intimate as well. Loved the story, can't wait to raid your profile to see what other stories you have. Midnight ;p
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/7/2012
Oh God, ur story is like a kiss itself. Can't get enuf of it :(
| Seth the Inu chapter 6 . 6/30/2012
Oh wow! ... Just, WOW! You managed to put so much emotion between the two in such a shortish amount of words, and do it so well! I love your stories! And oh god, there's a sequal! Exciting! SQUEE! I'm lookinh forward to whetever you decide to come up with next!
| bostafu chapter 6 . 3/7/2012
OMG THIS WAS SOOO GOOOD, I WASN'T DISAPPOINTED! Gah, I KNEW you were good. But damn I didn't know how good. This was sooo AMAAAZING.
Your Yugi and Atem is different from all the others, in a way I find them OOC, but I think that's just cuz I'm used to the stereotypical or cliched type of Atem and Yugi created by others. Yours is just so original and so in depth! It's like while others are in 2D your characters are definitely 3D!
Gah and the way the relationship between Atem and Yugi developed, and how they eventually opened up! It was nice and slow and realistic! I was expecting for them just to fall in love with each other as soon as they kissed and touched, the moment they looked at each other - cliched I know, but that's what usually happens. But daamn, they really got on each other's nerves, and I got irritated along with Yugi. I totally empathized when Yugi's pride was wounded when Atem didn't react at all and Atem downright telling him what he was doing was wrong. Gah I was so frustrated, but it was good.
And MAN you must be so experienced, because I did NOT know all these things about kissing AT ALL. Well I haven't even kissed yet so of course I wouldn't. But still, the description and feeling of the kissing is so VERY different from others, and so totally NEW, this has got to be the first. Seriously wow, secret language of kissing indeed! This just seriously throws me off into a new perspective.
Gah, originality, in-depth characters, the build up of the relationship, enlightenment - let's just say I love you D. Ah not to mention the longest review I have EVER made. Wtf I just surprised myself, I have never done this before.
| bostafu chapter 2 . 3/6/2012
lol Well I'm definitely learning a thing or two from this.. eh XD
And ooh I wonder what Yugi is gonna do next to seduce Atemu.
| bostafu chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
Damn this is good. And I knew I wouldn't be disappointed by you, especially with your style of writing. Ah I can't wait how this will turn out!
| TaintedAngel2923 chapter 6 . 2/6/2012
This is definitely one of the greatest fics I have ever read. Hands Down. :D
| Malcolm Grey chapter 6 . 1/18/2012
U sud continue lol this is a really well written tale! xDD god wish i had ur talent!
| MyBrotherTadashi chapter 6 . 12/28/2011
-bursts into tears-
It's just not fair! I get to read YOUR GENIUS WORK AND THEN IT STOPS BEFORE AWKWARD DATES AND WONDERFUL HAPPY ENDINGS,
and then I have to go back and read other people's stories! No! Come back! I need more!
| Redglowingheart chapter 6 . 8/14/2011
This was amazing! And, also, I can dance around because you haven't left your account dead! (Deeply sorry if I offended you.) YAY! *cheers and screams head off* Um...Anyhow, I really like your stories they are awesome. It's good to know people with great talent are still writing! YAY!
| Secret Sheik chapter 4 . 6/30/2011
"Take a potato chip... AND EAT IT!"
Oh wow I'm a dork.
| Saskie chapter 6 . 5/22/2011
Haha It was great!
| LOL chapter 6 . 11/5/2010
OH THATS MEAN YOU ENDED IT AT A BAD SECTION
| YukinoKara chapter 6 . 10/20/2010
I really enjoyed reading this! It's such an entertaining idea- very amusing, and I love the way you wrote it.
Jou was hilarious. Yuugi was adorable, Atemu was endearing, and Ryou was cute. The entire situation had me cracking up repeatedly. xD
I think that you wrote it really well! I love how detailed everything was, and I feel that it flowed very well.
You did an amazing job with this!
| Eternal Nightshade chapter 6 . 2/18/2010
NO! I heard that the sequel to this story is low on your list of priorities so I came to BEG, PLEAD, AND IMPLORE you not to abandon it because I really, really, really enjoyed this story, and I am positively SQUIRMING at the idea of never finding out where these interesting and lovable interpretations of this beloved duo could end up.
Please? *puppy eyes * Pretty, pretty, please? I'll trade you a chibi Yuugi and a cookie! A chibi Yami, Yuugi, and a tray of cookies? A shirtless mob of bishonen in leather pants? Come on! This story NEEDS its partner! It's lost and alone without it!
Like Atemu would've been stuck in the puzzle if he had never met lil' Yuugi...sure, he'd always be a hot-hunk-a-pharaoh on his own, but he'd still be so lonely. ( Thus, this story will always be great, but its true awesomeness would be in feeling complete, and it does not...quite feel that way yet. Please?