Reviews for Gothic Mew Mew
Mystic Stars chapter 4 . 2/27
Please update very soon!
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 4 . 3/11/2014
More more more please! Really like this story so far, there are not enough emo or gath stories out there. I know you haven't worked on this story in a while, but I really hope you decide to pick it back up again soon. . . . _ And did I mention that I want more?
Guest chapter 4 . 8/6/2013
Write more
Sapphire Heat chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
It's sounds great with Ruby being Goth and Kao being emo I would love to hear more about the camping trip. BYE.
Ebony Dagger chapter 4 . 5/17/2009
arigato for updating, this is getting interesting, a camping trip with Kenji huh?

looking forward to the next chappie

(tell your sister to poke you till you update, i need a sister to do that too, actually)

ta

please update
Huntress Silverleaf chapter 4 . 4/26/2009
'Twas gurd...buh too short :(
Saba's Reflection chapter 4 . 4/21/2009
o.o Seriously, don't go! Ryou might pull off a shower scene. x.x Kenji's annoying. xP
Tomahawk 3.0 chapter 4 . 4/21/2009
this was a good chapter. awesome work. I like how Ryou reacted in this chapter, and I really like this ending. greta job!
Chang-Tong chapter 4 . 4/21/2009
Ooh what is Ruby planning with bringing Kenji along? Heh, and what did Ryou and Ruby do to make them not like each other? Boy... that was quick.

...Oh maybe you hated Ryou too? 0_0

Anyway, nice chapter! Ciao! ;D
Leigh-Leigh chapter 4 . 4/20/2009
Me: O.O I didn't give you away... I loaned you to imouto-chan Emily!

Emerald: ...

Me: and yes! She is here and in a dark pit of depression! ]

Emerald: ...

Me: ...that's it... I AM KILLING DIA! And by the way Emily! I have a surprise!

Jeff(walks in...covered in snow?): Emily-chan! I am back!

Me: ] See? NOW GIVE ME MY JUN PLUSHIES! And I hope Kenji says yes! And I want Kao to do something in the next chapter... (evil glare) or use imouto-chan... or else... (disappears into darkness)

Jeff:... creepy...
Tomahawk 3.0 chapter 3 . 4/2/2009
great job! really good, but maybe Kao could try something more next time. :)
Huntress Silverleaf chapter 3 . 4/2/2009
Good story. I like it :D

Though in parts, it didn't make sense. Revise your sentence structure before posting more chapters. It's too difficult to read and commas are in wrong places/not needed.

I also think that there is too much swearing in this fic. I know that Ruby seems to be one of those abused people, but many of them don't swear, and if they do, they use it scarcely.

On the whole though, your stortyline seems to be immaculate and gripping. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters :D
Chang-Tong chapter 3 . 4/2/2009
I'm such a good guesser! 8D

Kao is... a cutter? He cut himself! Ohh, that's just... scary and unexpected, seeing that he's such a carefree person in the previous chapter.

Love it! Try to be a little more descriptive, okay?

I don't know the exact animal that she is infused with.

The only mistake you made is Ruby's Mew name. All the Mew-Mew's names are named after a food.

Just in case you don't know, Zakuro got her name from the fruit called Pomegranate. Have you heard of it?

'Ruby' is obviously not the name of any food. And you still need to be a little more descriptive. That's my only criticisms. That's all.

On a better note, you're doing better.

Ciao!
Saba's Reflection chapter 3 . 4/2/2009
Maybe you should of added more detail on how Ruby exactly found her calling as Mew Ruby. o.O It was good, all in all, because she kicked ass! Or punched jaws... O_O
SeEmYaWeSoMeNeSs chapter 3 . 4/1/2009
lol, I love her reaction... Priceless.

Hee hee, Kao and Kisshu obviously have the same genes... Maybe they get their personalities from their father? lol, I've always pictured Kisshu having a dad just like him...

...Or maybe a mom. O.O Wo...

Hee hee, Kenji reminds me of Mike from Twilight...

I like it, please continue soon! -
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