Reviews for No Power
Kyndsie chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Wow. This is amazing. Well-told - a snippet that makes me long for it to continue, but ends at a good stopping point.

(as a fangirl, I can't imagine that she wouldn't have bellowed out for him during delivery, and/or that he wouldn't have appeared shortly thereafter; as a writer, I applaud your restraint.)
loretta537 chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
this is good
Jane Owen chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
I read this because I saw the sequel "Goblin Babe" and I wanted to read this first before I got down to the nitty gritty :-D. Great little one shot and a great opener to what I'm expecting to be a great "sequel"...in quotes because it seems to be the actual story and this seems to be a "prequel". One minor critique: "A moth passed I didn't bleed..."...should be "month"-got me a bit distracted there :-D.

I loved the line: "Then came her ultimatum... Visit the death clinic or leave." and Sarah's response. Very powerful! Good for her! :-D

And now on to "Goblin Babe"...I'm looking forward to it!
notwritten chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
I have enjoyed reading this today. Have a cool day. Keep smiling. :-)
Meandotherproblems chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
So cute this story, but I feel there's more :)
Veronica Pop chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Again another great Labyrinth Fanfic!

-Veronica Pop!
gravityisagainstme chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Good, somewhat poetic in style. Needs a second part, though. Jareth must be told.
Thundara chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
i love this story please write more of it ( have jareth and sara marry