|Reviews for Slashy Fun|
| ToruKun1 chapter 3 . 11/24/2010
HERP DERP THEY WERE JUST ROLE PLAYING ALL ALONG, VHAT A TWEEST! XD
(seriously, I was kinda disappointed at that, LOL)
ROFL the KISS makeup fantasy...Lemme guess, Edge would be Gene and Juff would be Paul? (I'm only assuming Juff would be the waifu in this scenario because it's Edge who wants it)
I would like MOAR toys stuffed up Addy's butt, PLAZ!
| HardyxGirlx89 chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
I LOVED it - besides being insanely hot I adored the little twisr when Jeff finally got his fix, that was wicked cute.
| sunligh584 chapter 4 . 11/2/2009
I love this story and I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. :) UPDATE! very hot
| JoMoFan-spot chapter 4 . 10/16/2009
'JoMoFan-spot, you have ruined me w/ Adam bottoming. I hope you know this. Now, I more than see him as a contender to bottom.'
If seriously I am the reason of your Adam's muse current status, I am damn proud of it. Infact, very very proud of that. Even if I played a little tiny part I am still very happy. Cause honestly, never ever before I have enjoyed slash or Adam's character this much. You have like made reading a whole lot more interesting for me. I am very happy that I have finally found someone who I can really consider my favourite after reading and wandering in the slash world for 5 years. Its comforting thought that its not the fact that you are writing my fav characters in my prefered roles that have me gawking in praise, but its actually the fact how much I am enjoying your writing. Your characterization, detail in scenes, awesome innovative plots, language, its all amazing.
'Fate Happened' maybe on a hold but am I glad to have a little taste of its sweetness. I was really excited for Matt/Mor pairing in that, but since that was Jeff/Adam/Randy mainly, I wasnt expecting anything particular about them. I absolutely adore Mor. I think you write him as cutely as you write Adam. They are both very natural when being like this, cute, innocent, girly. Surely you are not the first one to write Adam or Mor as subs but you are definitely the best one. I think I have given someone credit for writing Mor very well before, writing Adam the best goes to you clearly.
Aww, Matty's sulking, but hes hot like that. I hope he is sexually frustrated as well, that would produce some fun things. And the way Jeff and Adam were walking on the beach and being all romantic, it was adorable.
Hehe, dont know why but Mor playing with girls and blushing and being teased, I found that to be very cute. I can so imagine him like that, being no threat to women. Seriously, its so hard to consider John a boy sometimes since he so looks like a girl and it seems like his opponents are constantly trying to rape him on SD. Johnny is very flexible and I have a very dirty slashy mind. I can make simple innocent things look like questionable. Atleast for my own benefits.
Hmm Matt getting hot and bothered by seeing beautiful Morrie, and now he is imagining. Cant blame him. He IS sexually very frustrated. Although any normal man even with a boyfriend could have similar feelings since he was looking at Morrison.
Oh Mor is hurting, stupid Miz...but come to the rescue protective Matt. It'll be all good. Ah, how I would love a scenario where Mor would be in a troubled relationship and Matt or Christian could cure his hurt heart.
Matt is so blunt. He doesnt waste any time. But good for him, Mor is a moaning slut afterall. So fucking hot how easily he made Mor submit. I still hate Miz for ignoring someone as pretty as John. I mean you do not NOT play with Morrie.
Haha, Matt told him to be quite...I find it very funny when someone tell Mor or Adam to be quite...I mean sluts are fun when being noisy. No fun otherwise.
He wants to draw a crowd...hehe naughty dirty Mor. I wish he had mouthed that word out loud though.
Jeff's getting a live show...and what an awesome one. Did I tell you how much I love Addy pouting...he is so lovable.
Hehe, no question John is a thing of beauty but no one can compare to Adam's beauty. And his ass...oh its inviting. I like the way Jeff talks. He has one hell of a dirty mouth. I always want Addy's lovers to get real dirty with him.
I gave up on sense for Jeff. He doesnt need to make any sense when he talks. He is just spoiled like that. What he says goes, no matter if it makes sense or not. And we trust Jeff to make things fun and sexy for us always.
Sex rocks, on the beach or not...its Jeff/Adam so Adam let sand go in bad places...it will be worth it. Seriously, this is probably the best sex scene I have read from you featuring Jeff/Adam. I like it more than FH's first chapter. Jeff is so dirty, so commanding, and Addy surrendens so easily, so
helplessly...plus I adore how slutty he is in Jeff's hands. When Jeff takes command and give orders, its so believeable.
I think you have pulled a sweet dom Jeff of very well since he is still holding up his crazy and spoiled personality along. And the way Adam followed Jeff's orders when he was ordering Adam to suck him was so fucking hot. Adam like that...beyond hot. And by the way, I adore Jeff's pet names for Adam so much...specially when he call him his doll. Its so cute.
"Dammit, why the hell didn't I bring that fucking camera?"
Yeah, Why Jeff, Why? Shit, that image of Addy is so fucking hot. I would have loved if Jeff had taken some pictures. Thats a photographed worthy image.
Oh fuck, that sex scene left me speechless. Adam's whimpers, him being putty in Jeff's hands, his crys, his writhing, his whines, his sluttiness...it was all to well. Jeff is too good when dominating yet somewhat sweet like that. Loved how Adam wanted Jeff's hand on him instead, and the bargaining chip was so alluring. Jeff could never, or for that matter no one could ever deny a private show from Adam hehe.
Lol, Jeff watched Matt taking Mor...than Matt watched Jeff taking Adam...oh they are both so kinky...hehe.
This was amazing, such a enjoyable one shot. Sometimes it becomes very hard to enjoy a one shot since it lacks detail and plot, but this one had everything that made it perfect.
| BellaHickenbottom chapter 4 . 10/4/2009
That sounds like the most enjoyable Therepy session ever! Ok, Hardyz watching their brothers have sex should revolt me but im too far gone to care LOL
| Magz86 chapter 4 . 10/2/2009
Great update! HOT!
| NeroAnne chapter 4 . 10/2/2009
XD! Because Matt and Mor are too hot to ignore! XD! It's "Mattison." XP!.
OMG! I love it! Mor is such a pretty bottom for Matt! It just works! XD!
Haha, XD! Adam bottoms AGAIN! Holy shiznit! XD! I love it, XD! Like I always do!
| redsandman99 chapter 4 . 10/2/2009
Yes! Sex on the pier! That is awesome! Me like.
| Always Straightedge and proud chapter 4 . 10/2/2009
maor. that's the only thing i could come up with at the moment.
| damageddementia chapter 4 . 10/2/2009
How did I not favorite this? This collection of sheer awesomeness?
First of all, thank God, someone had Matt and Mor go at it. I've been waiting for it! (I mean, it's so far on my to do list, I might just have them in my next long story) And Jedam is always loved- especially when Adam's turning the slut instead of Jeff.
Terrah, you rock so much.
| Esha Napoleon chapter 4 . 10/2/2009
MaJo? JoMa? Jatt? MaMor?
That's all I can think of!
Awesome chapter ;)
| Dark Fae Angel chapter 4 . 10/2/2009
Hot as always, double dose of hotness this time. Mor is going to be finding sand in strange places for a month! Like Mor wouldn't like getting raped by Matt Hardy. Anyone in that position would love it!
Oh yummy, Jeff doninating Addy! Always always always so fucking hot! Then again so is Addy dominating Jeff. And Matt dominating Addy. And Matt dominating Jeff. GAH THEY'RE ALL TOO HOT! Throw Mor in the mix and it's almost too much! Love Ya!
P.S. *Holds up shotgun in one hand and axe in the other* IT'S ZOMBIE HUNTING TIME BITCHES!
| sunligh584 chapter 3 . 8/29/2009
Great chapters loved all three of them I can't wait for more please update soon. :)
| takers dark lover chapter 3 . 8/18/2009
I just read chapters 1-3 and thought they were great. I really hope you are going to continue this story!
| wrestlefan4 chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
Wow this was kind of graphic but I did like a lot of things about it. I like the feelings between Adam and Jeff and I like how Jeff had the money all along that was sweet. Skittles illegal? LOL. Somehow the image of Randy bursting in and yelling "The cops are here, scat!" Just had me rolling on the floor, it was just the mental image I have of it lol! Oh and um, the story that inspired you to do this sounds interesting. Do you remember what it was called or who wrote it? I wouldn't mind reading it sometime. Great job. :)