Reviews for The Unwelcome
Firefly-Maj chapter 1 . 4/15/2009
Hehe... the pains every father of a daughter seems to have to go through one day!

I remember MY father when I had my first boyfriend... oh boy (feel free to take that literally ;D)!

Let me quote another author here: "it strikes a man more dead than a great reckoning in a little room". )
Battered notebook of stories chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
I stopped by your profile and was so glad to have found this. Tender and bittersweet,you've perfectly captured that moment when a parent needs to let their child grow up.

I've read Tolkien since I was 13, but don't usually read LOtR fanfic. From you I'll be back for more.:)
wandamarie chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
it was a good chapter thank you
Ecri chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
That was both sweet and funny! Loved the line about him understanding Elrond better! Fabulous moment. Your descriptions are wonderful...especially this line

His tired eyes meet mine. “But gone is the look of love and wonder and total trust, Arwen,” he murmurs sadly. “That gaze now belongs to Caullach. I have seen it, and been humbled by it. My baby is a baby no longer.”

Aw! Poor Aragorn!

Keep writing.
Mirach chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Poor Aragorn, a typical father! It shows how deeply he loved his daughter.