Reviews for Ameliorating the Future
nightpurr chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
this has been a wonderful story but I notice it is not complete. :-( do you intend to pick it back up & complete it?
LoveSpock chapter 32 . 6/28/2013
Great story! I read the first one and just had to read this sequel!

I really hope you pick it up again writing it.
josecullenforever chapter 32 . 6/9/2013
i absolutly love this sequel! i saw that you havent uptdate in a while so please continue this story! im begging you!
PD: i speak spanish not english, so excuse me for any mistake :D
di chapter 12 . 12/16/2012
why didn't you call it a draco/severus story...:(
Bkschim chapter 32 . 8/21/2012
Awe :( I was very sad to see that the story had not been completed. I was reading at every chance i got for the past two days, absolutely glued to the screen. I loved the way you expressed the characters. I have read MANY Severitus FanFics and this by far has been the best thought out and well written one I have come across. I really do hope that one day you will come back and finish it. I will be waiting for that day!
OldestOfTheYoung chapter 15 . 7/13/2012
Oh thank you! Ahh, now I feel much better about how this story is going now that the Severus and Harry thing is sorted.
If Draco is going to be a part of Harry's little family shortly I think I could see them becoming possible friends. I hope Ron can at least not do something stupid when he hears the whole story.
OldestOfTheYoung chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
I really, really hope you'll manage to find some miracle to somehow bring Harry and Severus back together. I think that if he's given a chance to explain, and he does explain EVERYTHING, that Severus could make Harry not hate him anymore. Probably not be very happy with him at all and distrustful for a while, but not hate him.
Well done characters, and I think you're really sticking to how you made Harry in the prior fanfiction. That usually seems to be the one thing a lot of people find difficult.
MegaNerdAlert chapter 32 . 3/7/2012
Okay, I just spent the last two days glued to my computer reading this story, and the one that came before it. Only to get to the end, find it left HANGING...seriously, you should finish this.

I mean REALLY!
FFL chapter 32 . 12/21/2011
Please continue this story. I have truly fallen in love the the characters you made and I absolutly love the story line and plot. You have inspired my own storys that I hope one day will flow as smoothly as yours do. So please for a loyal fan continue this wonderful story you have made.
FanfictionLover chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
OMG I LOVE YOUR FANFIC IT IS QUITE POSSIBLE BE THE BEST S&H FANFIC I HAVE READ. YOU CAPTURE THERE CHARICTERS PERFECTLY! I AM REALLY AMAZED!
AccioYellowSlug chapter 32 . 12/1/2011
This is possibly the best serveritus fanfic i have ever read! i love it! i love serverus and harry's relationship and how its grown right from the very start and they hated each other and now finally serverus admitted he loved harry. it still follows the harry potter story but in a different way with new and exciting characters which u just want to read more and learn more about them its brill. you really have me hooked. hooked so much that i have read this fanfic more in the past week than done revision for my prelims (oops) but it was worht it cos its GREAT!

please pick up from where u have left off a year ago cos i really want to find out what happens and what other secrets have been hinted at and we discover them in detail. and of course i want to know if servers and harry live. please please please say they do. the best stories have a happy ending!

Keep Writing and I LOVE THIS!

:D xxxxxxxxxxxx
kat chapter 5 . 8/11/2011
lol i dont think i like the names faye and imogen, they really stick out

anyways not much going on yet

i love how snape did get dumbledore, see how everything lays out
Ciara Wood chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
Hey, I read this story and the prequel in a block and I just thought I'd drop you a line. I think that your writing is amazing in fact it is like twenty times better than mine. Your use of words and your style are seemingly unique and flawless to the effect I hope you are trying to achieve.

Just a few worry's that came to mind.

1. First of all i noticed in both this fic and atoning that your years are sometimes wrong. This fic should take place in 1997 not 1998.

2. I am a little disappointed with the storyline in some places as well as the plot. I know it is difficult to think of something original to write to begin with and this story is based off what I think is one of the most popular Harry Potter challenges and I admire your persistence. However I feel that there are a few details or instances that seem based off another fanfic. I must commend you however on the fact that you have taken these ides and twisted them into new ways.

I am not trying to criticize or flame you I think your story and your writing is amazing and I hope you update soon, In fact for all I know I am completely wrong and the author based their fic of yours.

Keep up the great work with this amazing story,

An enthralled reader.
Q chapter 32 . 3/31/2011
Awwww, see, this is why I don't read stories unless they say complete usually, but you hooked me with the first story!

This is excellent. You really have some unique ideas that really work with the existing story and characters. I can't wait to see an update. Please, update!
James chapter 32 . 3/19/2011
This is real good, how long is it going to be?
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