Reviews for Maternal Sonata: Crescendo
Marsa The Redeemed chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
i like it very interesting
Emeryald chapter 2 . 3/14/2011
pretty good so far, please continue :)
HinawithLove chapter 2 . 3/14/2011
I like it so far.
omgitsdanimals chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
Nice story the overall plot is really good I guess my only complaint would be how many children they have, 8 seems a little much and kind of unbelievable to start a story off with anyways. maybe 1 to 3 kids would have sufficed a little better.
lexzly chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
like your story..

how old are hinata and sasuke here?

they sure made a lot of kids.. hahaha.

can't wait for the chap..

please update soon
crookshies chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
good-update soon...
SHeWithNoName chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
sounds cool so far
harley944 chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
i say leave it as it is the story is very good
AleSwan chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
wow... pretty interesting... keep writing it...OMG... the have 8 kids? wow

Mhm, I think that when hina talks to sasuke he at first won't believe her... but after a little talk... he will believe her and help her remember everything... thant would be cool ... XD oh and what happend to naruto? heheh to many questions...

great fanfic... update soon please... see ya l8r

Good luck

Ja ne

STEVEO 352 chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
this sounds or lookes real cool
ShikaMariUchiha chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
I really like the pilot to this story. I hope that you continue with it. If I can make a suggestion, maybe you could tell the story from Hinata's POV that way we find out what is going on along with her. And maybe they have fewer kids 8 seems like alot especially if she has no memory of them. Maybe 1 or 2 kids at first.
patty perail chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
thanks for the advice on my story i know it's not great but thanks oh and i love you story fanfic w/e. any way thanks again and um yeah great story
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