| Reviews for Never Give Up |
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   Lemon Verbena chapter 6 . 7/8/2009 Are you going to overwrite the old chapters or post the new ones as a continuation of the story? I ask because once I've reviewed a chapter I'm blocked from reviewing it again - even if it's been re-worked. |
| mzzzzzzzz chapter 6 . 7/7/2009 Oh, kk Annie. You're right, some aspects of the story are quite confusing like how she's never met another vampire before. She must have because she's very old and must have smelt them in her travels. Zut alors, ma amie! |
| miki natsuko chapter 5 . 7/6/2009 okay i am a little lost but other then that its going good. but please explain what the heck is going on, bella is a vampire gotcha, but everything else i just dont get it. so i am hoping the next chapter will explain what i am missing. please update soon |
| mzzzzzzzz chapter 5 . 6/18/2009 NO! Don't stop Annie! KEEP GOING! Kat and Alessandro. He he ;) Can I be in it somewhere? Please, please, please? You're my best friend Annie. I love you! ( he he, bribery and blackmail) Seriously though, that was great. You're a good author. |
| jktwi chapter 5 . 5/31/2009 carry on the story it needs a happy ending it has so much more potental |
| Lemon Verbena chapter 5 . 5/25/2009 STOP HERE if you don't have enough faith in yourself or creativity to continue the story without our approval |
| AmberEyedWolf1215 chapter 1 . 5/20/2009 Hi miss lemming this is really good so can you keep writing it because i really want to know if edward is a vamp as well as bella. ps. i might make you tell me whats going to happen later in the story in DT tomorrow. pps. if you dont know who this is i sit 2 places to your right in DT. |
| Lemon Verbena chapter 4 . 5/4/2009 A little cat & mouse... how do 2 people who have the same secret figure out that they have the same secret? do tell :) |
| Lemon Verbena chapter 3 . 5/4/2009 Flesh out your descriptors a little more, strengthen your characters by giving us more background on them, and create :) You've got a unique storyline that I'd love to see play out more. |
| UnderstatedGenius chapter 3 . 4/27/2009 It's not obvious, i am completely lost! xxScarletteCullenxx P.S Loving the way it's going though! Update soon please! Luv ya hunni! |
| Clumsy By Nature chapter 3 . 4/26/2009 I like the tittle and the story itself. It really has alot of potential. Keep up the awesome work! P.S: Check out my story if you have the chance. |
| pesuasion chapter 3 . 4/26/2009 its good but ? who's the vamp? |
| L'Heure Rouge chapter 1 . 4/14/2009 I feel like an idiot. I'm commenting on your last chapter and asking you to check out my stories when you have already done so. Sorry. Anway, I like your story and hope you update very soon. |
| L'Heure Rouge chapter 2 . 4/14/2009 I like teh story. It's please hurry up with another update. P.S: Check out my stories if you have the time. |
| Lemon Verbena chapter 2 . 3/23/2009 Havign a hrd time flolwing the plot. |