|Reviews for Leave The Horcrux|
| missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 2/27
Yep, much more realistic. Great story!
| Mr Big chapter 1 . 1/11
I have a question for the stupid reveiwer called HermioneGirl96. If you are not stupid beyond belief then I dont know who is. This is fanfiction you idiot. People write their own stories using the wonderful characters created by Mrs JKR. They do not write the exact same stuff as Mrs JKR because that would be illegal. If you can not grasp that fact then why the hell did you read fan fiction. Its idiots like you that can deter a young writer who might have a wonderful plot waiting to be written, I'm glad that the two writers of these stories are old enough to understand what an idiot you are. Now my question Why did you bother to read the story? is it you are so thick you expected a copy of chamber of secrets or maybe GoF?
| HermioneGirl96 chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
The ending is too tidy. If the Horcruxes were so hard to find, there's no way Harry would have found them without looking. Besides that, I really do believe that Harry and Hermione were platonic friends. Also, Ron is useful: he's the first one to make Harry feels like he belongs, and he knows the Wizarding world much better than either Harry or Hermione, since he's the only one of the three raised by wizards. This knowledge is really important when it comes to the story of the Deathly Hallows and its importance to the Horcrux search, and also in the earlier books. Furthermore, Ron abandoned neither the military nor a marriage, and there is such a thing as forgiveness. When the friendship is as deep as Ron's with Harry, I believe forgiveness can exist, especially given that Ron saved Harry's life immediately upon return. I guess this is my first-ever flame, but I really do think that Rowling got the plot right, and I'm sticking to that.
| saashi samy chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
i love the couple
| Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Heh-heh! Nice going Moldyshorts, you sunk your own plan! :-D *evil grin*
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
liked this story
| furface294 chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
| Fjdocbskfbanxdac chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
It's a good storyline but the run-on sentences drove me crazy. Please fix them
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
| Flutterbytink chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
I approve of getting rid of Ron.
| alix33 chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
"Hermione found there was an added advantage to staying in bed and breakfast hotels and houses, and that was the usually very comfy beds they could make love in," - Yes, very comfy beds with as many warm quilts, blankets and or down duvets as they wanted or needed. DH (book) and its bleakness and especially some of my favourite fictional people having to sleep so very cold in it, upset me.
| tfobmv18 chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
I definitely love this version more than JKR's. Keep up the good work.
| Light Lord Cybergate chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
That's how it should have been...get rid of the extra baggage. Kill the bad guy... and get the girl.
*Sigh* it was sadly not to be.
| MSgt SilverDollar chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Justice for Ron, its amazing that JKR didn't see it that way. Great one-shot!
| PSay chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
This is a nice change. Hermione is too smart to end up with Ron. She and Harry are a much better match. Thanks for a different view. I really liked this one. pms