Reviews for Leave The Horcrux
BlueEagle4090249 chapter 1 . 7/10
This is exactly how I wanted that part to happen.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25
I loved this. When I first read DH I had already read some reviews and knew who supposedly ended up with who but when Ron left them during the hunt and they got close I still held out a bit of hope that they would end up together. I hated Ron after GOF and always wondered how Hermione could ever fall in love with someone who always treated so badly.
Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 1/1
lovely xxxxxx
Alex chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
Emma Watson looks sexy in your profile picture!
ElementalMaster16 chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
pretty cool fic! far more real than canon.

chadairuler chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
Yes, this is what should have happened. I really do not know why Ron was still considered their friend after everything he has done. Harmony ftw.
PairingMatters chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
This story has something in common with the story 'Just a Dream', by chem prof.
Decent oneshot.
Deathday Party Planner chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
You know, I think you have captured a very real .common phenomenon in the life of a girl. Through high school and college as well as with some of my later married girlfriends, maybe half of us went through a phase where we seemed to just go crazy. We were aware our behavior was bizarre on some level but just couldn't seem to help ourselves and the result would often destroy important relationships. At some point, often way too late, we would just snap out of it, coming back to ourselves saying we were sorry for our behavior and didn't know why it happened. Our remaining friends would then band around us and we would pick up the pieces to move on. Happily married for 15 years now, I look back on my own episode of seeming insanity back in high school and still just have to shake my head. Hermione's behavior in 6th year, attacking Harry and shifting focus on to Ron seems just such an episode. Your story appears to capture the event where Hermione luckily emerges from her temporary insanity before she destroyed her loving relationship with Harry. I could clealy empathize with her confusion and pain! Excellent job, truly well done! Thank you for sharing.
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
Yep, much more realistic. Great story!
Mr Big chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
I have a question for the stupid reveiwer called HermioneGirl96. If you are not stupid beyond belief then I dont know who is. This is fanfiction you idiot. People write their own stories using the wonderful characters created by Mrs JKR. They do not write the exact same stuff as Mrs JKR because that would be illegal. If you can not grasp that fact then why the hell did you read fan fiction. Its idiots like you that can deter a young writer who might have a wonderful plot waiting to be written, I'm glad that the two writers of these stories are old enough to understand what an idiot you are. Now my question Why did you bother to read the story? is it you are so thick you expected a copy of chamber of secrets or maybe GoF?
HermioneGirl96 chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
The ending is too tidy. If the Horcruxes were so hard to find, there's no way Harry would have found them without looking. Besides that, I really do believe that Harry and Hermione were platonic friends. Also, Ron is useful: he's the first one to make Harry feels like he belongs, and he knows the Wizarding world much better than either Harry or Hermione, since he's the only one of the three raised by wizards. This knowledge is really important when it comes to the story of the Deathly Hallows and its importance to the Horcrux search, and also in the earlier books. Furthermore, Ron abandoned neither the military nor a marriage, and there is such a thing as forgiveness. When the friendship is as deep as Ron's with Harry, I believe forgiveness can exist, especially given that Ron saved Harry's life immediately upon return. I guess this is my first-ever flame, but I really do think that Rowling got the plot right, and I'm sticking to that.
saashi samy chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
i love the couple
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Heh-heh! Nice going Moldyshorts, you sunk your own plan! :-D *evil grin*
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
liked this story
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