Reviews for Most Days
JJ Rust chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Nice job getting into Luna's head and showing that at times things do get to her, but we also see her inner strength in dealing with the people who make fun of her or who don't understand her.

A couple little typos I caught: "resumer" should be "resume"

"cant" should be "can't"

Good job. Keep on writing.
RadicalReason chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Such a beautiful story. You rounded it off well with the last few sentences.

Luna's a difficult character to capture. The part where she is in the girls' bathroom, in front of the mirror was really sad, but realistic.
Queenie's Broken Heart chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
I really liked this story. I particularly liked the way you made all the sentences short, because that makes all Luna's thoughts sound very matter-of-fact, which she always is. It was really interesting that you made her aware of all the things that people were thinking and saying about her; although I didn't really think that she would shout at Millicent. I did love her reaction to Snape and when she saw Dean it made me really sad. I think that they're a wonderful couple. Excellent story, very well done.
Rasberry Parfait chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
This is insanely good! I think you're right about Luna. It can't be easy to be her.