|Reviews for Ex Machina II|
| sachi1325 chapter 13 . 2/15/2013
gr8 work once again :D
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/10/2013
lol. nice ending!
| Obi1Nemogbr chapter 13 . 10/31/2012
Fascinating way you treat this Deus Ex Machina.
| NightWithMoon chapter 11 . 10/27/2012
Honestly for a being who is supposed to get his power from being so much smarter than anything else... he truly is an idiot. It's rather annoying.
| ak chapter 13 . 7/23/2012
voldy a tué vernon, pourquoi dudley et pétunia l'auraient rejoint?
| Cathy-Ann chapter 10 . 7/19/2011
What is a NaNoWriMo ?
| vete chapter 5 . 7/18/2011
Why is he doing all of this? Is he bored and wants a laugh or what because I dont get it. He is a being of power that can do so much more then he is doing and yet he lets it unfold like this. The Unbreakable vow with Albus is something I dont get either, he doesnt need to do anything anybody tells him and yet he does. Well I guess I will have to read more and see if I find out. Hoping for my fire and smiting then there has been so far I mean he is "god" like being and can do pretty much anything. Well it is an interesting story so I will keep reading.
| Magicly Insane chapter 13 . 6/18/2011
Well I guess I will be continuing to read at least some of your stories, but only because you brought Hermione back at the end.
| Magicly Insane chapter 12 . 6/18/2011
That's it, I'm done reading this, you killed off my favorite character! I can't believe you killed Hermione! As much as I liked the series in the beginning I really don't like it now, because you're employing exactly what the title says, a deus ex machina to help harry.
| mitremlap chapter 13 . 5/18/2010
great story, thank you
| ILikeComps chapter 13 . 5/17/2010
Great story and very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing!
| TheNStorm chapter 10 . 4/23/2010
Hmm... well, I've been floating by the last ex machina and this one so far, and I think they're both decent storys. The only things I would point out is that on occasion you get stuck in a loop, so to speak, with dialogue; Dumbledore, for instance, can't stop saying "dear boy" and Vernon can't stop saying "ruddy" when you first introduce them. Secondly, at the start of Chapter 10 there's a welcome feast. At the end of Chapter 9 the kids are just coming back from Christmas break.
| ndesi62 chapter 13 . 4/4/2010
On the one hand, this isn't your best work-not only did things end up much worse for Harry than in the canon (all the deaths, less innocent personality, weaker relationship with Dumbledore), the plot was overly saturated with action and character deaths, resulting in, I felt, an emotionally draining experience. On the other hand, of course, it was well written, extremely well conceived, and enrapturing. I loved reading it, and it's still whirring through my head a day later (I'm having ideas for fanfiction on your fanfiction-fanfanfiction, if you will), so it's definitely a masterpiece of a story. You, of course, always produce a masterpiece no matter what you do. In short, great job, and I'm looking forward to something even better for next time.
| subzeus chapter 11 . 4/3/2010
Wow, I contemplated refusing to read any more of this story. Not because it is badly written, but because Hermione is my absolute favorite character of the books. Reading a HP story where she dies is almost unthinkable for me. But of course, I will go on and see where this leads, but I will probably have to read some sort of Hermione fluff piece after this lol
| Tamm chapter 13 . 3/24/2010
Wow! This was a truly amazing story! I read the first one, but it's been awhile. This one, compared to my impressions of the first, is better, although they were both good. I do hope you do yet another with Dumbledore... :D