|Reviews for Mile After Endless Mile|
| Charli800 chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
You've captured a poignant moment well here, and left me with something to think about. I enjoyed reading this; thank you.
If I were to change anything, I would work on the language. The tone of the piece is almost poetic, but the flow of your writing is not always quite as majestic as the concepts you're conveying.
A couple of typos:
"twin son’s of Elrond" - no apostrophe
"no word were spoken," - words
| Virtuella chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
This is an intense moment, well captured!