|Reviews for Ashes of Two Rivers|
| JadeOokami chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
That's an interesting spin on things. I like the thought of a past relationship with Jing Woo and the PC. The way you had their interaction was really good too.
| kosmokomik chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Ever since I first played through the game, I felt that the highly spiritual aspects of the game – especially this dream – had so many layers to them that would do well to be explored further in fics.
And you do it so brilliantly.
I like how you deal with the difficult fact that she "moved" on, in a manner of speaking, and that it is something that even the dead might have difficulty accepting when first presented with it. And to have them be faced with each other, even though it is only a dream, is a strange but incredibly beautiful farewell – a farewell that never came to a full closure, perhaps, but there is something very touching in that. The imperfection, so to speak, in that they will never have properly finished their love, is touching for me.
I loved this story.