Reviews for Explosives Not Fun
Guest chapter 7 . 8/4/2014
Great story
Muggle born 12 chapter 7 . 4/28/2011
I really enjoyed your story.
Madances chapter 7 . 2/15/2011
Hi! Enjoyed the story. Thanks, Tracy
kimly chapter 7 . 4/15/2009
Hi! Good story! :) I'm a big tony fan myself, and i love him being hurt etc.. but I thought that the ending came to fast, sudently everything was over, and I personally would want some of gibbs caretaking... after tony got hurt... and you made me very curious on what exactly did happen when tony was on painkillers the last time... but then again a good wrighter does not paint the whole picture if you know what I mean. Keep wrigthing! I will look after your fics :P really liked this story..
crokettsgirl chapter 6 . 4/1/2009
Maybe it's just me, but when something is written I like to hear the man was cuffed to a chair and then Gibbs interrogates him. Or that the man that knew Tony ordered them into the air ducts to go to a certain place. Once I catch on I'm fine with it. At least Abby is safe, Ziva, Ducky and Gibbs. But now Tony is lost in the ducts and hit again. The man is a jerk, hitting someone in the air duct, if something happened the guy wouldn't be able to move...Liked the flash back but wonder why they didn't let Gibbs see Tony and if Tony and Gibbs ever realized that they met during this time and Gibbs helped him. And I read a lot of these stories and I say hurray to you for getting NIS right in that time period. Most will still say NCIS. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 5 . 4/1/2009
Ok, I didn't see where they got up and went into an air duct. But now I guess the men are pushing Ziva and Tony through the air ducts and the agent was the plant. Now poor Abby not knowing what's goin on and calling down to Ducky, I hope Gibbs doesn't get hurt and gets the guy that's going to try and shot abby. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 4 . 4/1/2009
now how could Ziva be in two places at once or did I read that last part wrong. Well, Tony has an enemy and a very mad one to do this to NCIS a federal building and this man has power too. The memories of him being in college I guess the guy meant that he almost killed Tony but Tony either got him or something happened guess I'll find out. Sue
crokettsgirl chapter 3 . 4/1/2009
Your story is interesting. The explosion in the building locking down and McGee out and separating many people. Tony's the only one a bit hurt. And this figure seems to want something. I think the story has good potential, I really do. your writing is good. I just love bigger chapters to sink into..but this is how you write, just telling you. But I'm reading. I want to see what happened , who did this and where is came from. I think your doing great. sue
XX-Samantha-XX chapter 7 . 3/30/2009
yay a good ending to a good story :)
JadeAlmasy chapter 7 . 3/29/2009
hey Great job with wrapping up this story! loved every min of reading it!

Jade
hudson911 chapter 7 . 3/29/2009
What, no Ducky story? That's suprising, and he even knew it was a bad time for one. Great story though, I wish it hadn't ended so abruptly. But whatever it takes, you got the job done, good job.
hudson911 chapter 5 . 3/27/2009
Another good chapter, but hopefully there will be more next time and that it comes soon! Thanks!
XX-Samantha-XX chapter 5 . 3/27/2009
yay keep going :)
Ishty chapter 5 . 3/27/2009
im confused :/ *hmpf*

guess im gonna read it when your have all chapters up...
JadeAlmasy chapter 4 . 3/25/2009
Nice Job! lol i feel sorry for the guy with Ziva!

Hope you feel better!

Jade
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