Reviews for Doctor Who: The Eternal Fallacy
Fyoex chapter 8 . 10/27/2009
Lovely story.
timano chapter 8 . 7/13/2009
A superb story! I thoroughly enjoyed it. You captured Jack and the Doctor well, and their interaction was spot on. My thought throughout was that Susan was actually the Susan who was with the Doctor in the 1963 debut of the show, and that her grandfather was actually the Doctor (whom she called Grandfather)-but perhaps that would have been too obvious, so it's good, I suppose, that you didn't go that route.

Anyway, one of the better fanfiction stories I've read. 10 out of 10 stars! (And now for the sequel, wherein we meet Susan again and find out for sure whether she's the Susan of 1963? Or perhaps not; this story stands well on its own. Regardless, I look forward to reading more of your writing.)
123-321 chapter 8 . 4/28/2009
very well done! i quite enjoyed it!
123-321 chapter 7 . 4/20/2009

loved the dialogue!
123-321 chapter 6 . 4/15/2009

out of a job indeed...
123-321 chapter 5 . 4/12/2009
The Doctor seems so sad ;_;
123-321 chapter 4 . 4/6/2009
ah, so since he had no companion, he had to get HIMSELF kidnapped!
123-321 chapter 3 . 4/6/2009
lol i would like to see and elevator labeled like that!
123-321 chapter 2 . 3/26/2009

hehe! i can't wait to see what happens next!