|Reviews for Original Sin|
| KaChan84 chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
loved it :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
This was so beautiful and perfect oh my jesus .
| Athenafrodite chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
aaaw beautiful. loved it :)
| Rainbowed-Sunned-Spirit chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
*sniffles* So beautiful! I love Ed. Great job!
| ninaxw chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
I like the story very much, especially how you wrote Edward's thoughts.
| Ferity-88 chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Love this story)
| the-science-of-corruption chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
That was really good... Like, really, really, really excellent.
AND NOW I AM INSPIRED! BWAHAHAHA!
I guess I should thank you... Thanks. :DD
Really excellent! I hope I can see more of your work!
| hakuna177 chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
Awww this was really too sweet 3 and a really good read! The way you started and ended with the same line really got to me. Awesome job! Loved this
| JenBeee chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
Very nice! It describes their relationship well. :)
| Poisoned Scarlet chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
This was a really sweet and fluffy fanfiction. I loved it a lot and I hope you continue making some more of these EdWin shots :D
| kayy christine chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Absolutely perfect in every way imaginable.
| FreyaLin chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
aw that was cute...and sexy...and hot lol great job! i love how sexy u made Edward 0
| My-name-is-foxglove chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
Aw Really sweet, just, just very sweet _ And amazingly well written too! :) Loved it
| kehkaa chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Simply amazing. It was beautifully written and you described his inner battle so well. Thank you so much for writing and posting this.
Great job :)
| CreativebutLazy chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
beautiful, and amazingly written, well done. _