Reviews for The Older Grandpa
casey26334 chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
I would pay money for this scene to be in Breaking Dawn. lol. Great job, I loved it!
Gazing at Castles in the Sky chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
I love it! and the fact that charlie keeps repeating that he's a reasonable guy.
FRK921 chapter 1 . 6/13/2009
aw...Charlie!

SM's reactions from him in BD were exactly what I would have expected...the whole "Don't ask; Don't tell." thing
tanwellman chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
This was very, very cute. :) I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
Nervous.Laugh chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Excellent.

I love Carlisle and this Charlie POV was writen superbly. You're an excellent writer.
DobbyWobby chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
aw! i love it, really really good.
PenName76 chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
Ha! I like this a lot! I like how he cannot even brin himself to refer to Edward as anything, but "the husband." Great job. Very funny.
Forks in the Road chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Great story, and interesting topic. It is always fun to find some new and unique idea.
findthewill chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
This is well done. I like the idea of Charlie and Carlisle talking. Charlie is fairly suspicious by nature and profession, yet has decided not look too deeply into the Cullens. Carlisle's personality is naturally open, but he has to hide so much from humans. It's an interesting mix. I like your phrase, "I’m sitting, waiting in the most comfortable easy chair I’ve ever been in, feeling the most uncomfortable I’ve ever felt." It's a great portrayal of his feelings. I also like how you show Charlie's hostility toward Edward by having him always think of his as "the husband," rather than thinking his name. I like the warmth of the final scene.
JoeBob1379 chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
"He looks like he’s about to ask me about my childhood and if I ever loved my mother. It bothers me."

Lol! Love it! This whole thing is SO Charlie. Nicely done :)
cool-gal95 chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
Nice...D
twilight.EDWARD.CULLEN.roxx chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
LOVE THIS. CREATIVE
Miss Asian chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
Haha! The cutest fluff about Carlisle and Charlie EVER! I loved this! :] Great writing.
An Ocean Under A Thousand Suns chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
aw loved it
emmettsmyfave chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
a very nice carlisle/charlie moment, you did a good job!

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