| Reviews for The Wizard on the Edge of Forever |
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  Anonymous chapter 5 . 4/23 If Dudley and Harry were cousins - than wouldn't Jackson be Harry's very distant cousin and not uncle? |
 Polydicta chapter 20 . 4/4 I assume that the slingshot was successful, but due to changes in the timeline that further chapters have been lost in another timeline. Brilliant story. |
| KzintiKiller chapter 3 . 10/27/2022 Rereading this again, it occurs to me that the Goblins could pull a "Ferengi", if Harry gives them enough warning. In addition to taking magical knowledge and creatures into the tunnels below Gringotts, they could save a LOT of the mundane world's knowledge and history, and barter it to the Federation when they finally emerge. |
| flys36 chapter 20 . 10/19/2022 good story, wish more chapters had been posted like it said in the author comments, I would have like to see how it ended. |
| Eriktheviking70 chapter 20 . 6/24/2022 Still a pleasure to read, thank you. |
| JOHN0713 chapter 20 . 3/26/2022 You certainly wrote a very entertaining story and I for one hope to see more. Thanks. |
| mst3ktoo chapter 20 . 3/21/2022 Everyone has the Program? Small wonder theresa Temporal War |
| mst3ktoo chapter 17 . 3/21/2022 Suspect ... Did noone check the Master Healer? |
| mst3ktoo chapter 15 . 3/21/2022 Nicetie in with the espers. I've always wondered why Star Trek never mentions the whole I caged galaxything. You'd think it would come upon occasion |
| mst3ktoo chapter 6 . 3/21/2022 This Harry is kinda thick, ain't he. |
| mst3ktoo chapter 5 . 3/21/2022 Damn...that covers London, but Magic was worldwide... Kinda sus |
| Guest1138 chapter 18 . 2/2/2022 On another note, it would have been much more exciting to actually read about the events you glossed over during Harry's evaluation. He had several great adventures on a starship and you skipped right over them. That is definitely lazy writing when your summary(s) inside the story is better than the story itself. |
| Guest1138 chapter 20 . 2/2/2022 *KABOOOM!* One slight miscalculation caused the ship to explode and Captain Harry Potter was removed from the prophecy 'by his own hand'. The Voldemort vision came true and all of humanity was wiped from existence. |
| Guest1138 chapter 13 . 1/30/2022 You know, I really hate unnecessary cliffhangers. You EASILY could have stopped the chapter just before or just after. (sighs) Cursing you wouldn't help, not after all this time, would it? :( |
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/30/2022 Boy, did you screw that up majorly. he only thing Harry ever wanted was a family. What's this 'part of my heart wants the stars' crap? He's never shown any interest in going into space! You need to rewrite a lot of this to fix that problem, because it doesn't make sense. He found a nice girl and knocked her up, so he needs to be a man and do the right thing. |