Reviews for Cognitive Emergence
Asgard3 chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
I don't think Sheppard would hide his math abilities. He just wouldn't tell anyone unless it was necesary to save the world or appeared in casual conversation.
kookiemonster318 chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I love this and kind of wish there was more :) Keep up the writing
June Odyssey chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
Great job! I love to think that John is just as smart as Rodney, he just has his geeky side focused on math. Also loved the connection between the shows.
AstraLily chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
I loved this one-shot, but it would be great if you could continue it! There is so much potential for Sheppard and Charlie to work together on math and make Rodney jealous for a while... a secondary pleasure to solving some major crisis, of course.

Great job!
irezel chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
huuuuuuuuuuuuur! i looooove smart sheppard...3
SGAmvmm chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
this is good.. You can continue this.. Please make more chapters.. Its good to see John showing his math skills.. Maybe Charlie will try to find out who really is that man who solved his problem.. I hope you consider continuing writing more about John and Charlie..2 math genius. )
NamedForTheWind chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
I love it! Short n sweet is sometimes the way to go
Vi-Violence chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
I like it! **
Miss Enthusiasimal chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
Awesome one-shot but dude you could make that into a really awesomer story! Maybe some reconsideration is in order...?
B.E.W chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
What Happens next?
WisdomWriter25 chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This is a really good oneshot, though I hope you turn it into something more. I think you could really play around with either a series of further short stories from this. Examples are Rodney finding out, everyone else finding out,how that happens in many variations, maybe Charlie and John working on something together, John taking a tests to show his skill and I.Q., Don's teams reaction to him, what John thinks of his new reputation, and others.

Another idea is a much longer story revolving around John being really smart and able to help with some of the different projects, maybe hiding it so they do not realize it is him, or being able to help with some of the other problems their allies might have, and then the reactions when they find out or some variation.

Other ideas might be an alternate reality John outing him somehow like showing he is able to understand Rodney when he is in one of his rants, and then asking John why he hides when he understands just as well, and must have the same I.Q., or John for some reason , maybe a life threatening situation, when he notices a mistake or something while Rodney is trying to solve the problem, takes the marker from Rodney and shows him what is wrong.

I really do hope you or someone else takes these ideas and writes. Hopefully you write again soon.

Please let me know if you know of any good stories like these as I would love to read them.
PattyB chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
I'm certainly no writer but I'd like to encourage you

to write another chapter or two on this one.

The idea that John Sheppard is/was a math whiz intrigues me. If he and Charlie could meet for a

brain storming session would be fabulous.
SchroedingersKat chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Really loved this short fic! Would love for it to turn into something more, or maybe a sequal. I think that fics which deal with Sheppard being much more intelligent than McKay gives him credit for are great. They don't touch on that much in the series.

If your looking for other SGA/Numb3rs stories, you should check out one called 'Connecting Dots & Straight Lines' by 'this fish flies' which has Sheppard and Charlie being related.
Tempest07 chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
I love SGA/Numb3rs crossovers. If you get links to any fics, would you mind e-mailing me with them?

I don't know if you like mcshep, but if you do there is a great series by Keira Marcos that has Charlie appearing in one of the later fics in the series. The series is called "What might have been"
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