|Reviews for One Sunny Afternoon|
| Beautifully Falling chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
Draco wasn't too ooc because that's how I think he should act after the war. Great story!
| Eto117 chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
Draco was good. This just makes me wish they had a daughter. A girl Malfoy would be so interesting.
| aleera chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
So cute :)
| pyr0technic chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Draco wasn't TOO ooc, just a little bit. But it was still good! :)
| Skandar-Loves-Redvines chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
OH MY GOD, I READ THIS FOREVER AGO, AND I NEVER REVIEWED IT, AND THEN I COULDN'T FIND IT, AND NOW I VISIT YOUR PROFILE AND I FIND OUT THAT YOU WROTE IT, AND OH. MY. GOD. LIKE. WOAH.
In case you can't tell by the above caps lock rant, this discovery has freaked me out majorly.
| TayaCurragh chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Aw, this was very cute :) It was an interesting way for them to meet, most stories have them meeting at Hogwarts. Aurora siunds very adorable, too :)
| ToxicRainfall chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Draco and Astoria are my most favourite pairing, and I think you did them justice :) I really loved this, and I thought it was particularly sweet including the little girl. She seemed very adorable! It was well written, and I liked it very much. Well done :)
| kingslayers chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Well he went through a war, it's hard to say what's OoC, we never saw his thoughts as intimately as the golden Trios anyway so that's hard to say
| Paper Pearls chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
You certainly do have an original take on Astoria's character, and I liked the fact that she insisted upon paying for her own ice-cream because it demonstrated an independence that was quite refreshing. I think that your portrayals of her and Draco were well matched, and although he was a little OC, in a way you managed to justify it by linking to the war and all of the changes it would have brought about. Still, I can't see him working in a grocery store... That's my only real criticism.
My favourite section was this:
"Better than muggle-hunting,"
It was blase, dry and rather amusing. I liked the frankness of Draco's thoughts, and the way he treated blood ideology. In a subtle way it showed that, to a certain extent, Draco had been desensitised.
Well done! That was a sweet story.
| Ninja Potter chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
I've always thought Draco would have to shame himself after the way to regain some respect. I love this and I've never thought this is how they would meet! I love the part where she insists on buying her own. loved it!
| Victoria Viridian chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
nice...draco's so sweet! :D
| ChampionShoes chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
YAY! i wish that was a multi-chapter fic. too good to be just a one shot!
| Silver Sailor Ganymede chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Very sweet story, I liked it.
| ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
Nice, cute story, though a little on the short side. :)
| Espoir Noir chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Well, I couldn't stop at just one of your stories, could I? I liked "Pay Attention" better, but that could just be because it was longer, and I wanted more of this one...
I think you 'got' Draco quite well. I think he would have been a very different person after the war, and you have captured that mixture of regret and depression very well. Aurora was cute too (another lovely name..) Thank-you!