|Reviews for The Fallout|
| iammonkey1 chapter 39 . 5/18
this is one of the best storys ive read in a long time
| irelandk chapter 39 . 4/27
| Guest chapter 39 . 4/1
Dude I seriously don't know if you still log on here and stuff and frankly idc I just had to get this out my chest.
I normally hate tragedy, I like drama and wars as long as everybody gets to survive and when the final battle started I was pretty certain that one was gonna die but not Carlisle my baby omg I had a panic attack when he and Charlie were no more I couldn't take it I had to go. I read this in a record two days and I just couldn't put it down even tho I knew it was gonna be sad and make me cry I just jdgejfgenbfjd. You're a fantastic writer and though I wished this story would have ended differently and bae Esme wouldn't have to be alone and stuff this doesn't happen in real life, even if it is the world of vampire and wars it still can't be
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 6 . 3/13
I wonder who it could be?
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 5 . 3/13
Ugh! Baltimore? So near DC, and so crowded.
I grew up in Aberdeen, just 15 minutes from
the city. I know how bad an evacuation of the
area would be.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 4 . 3/13
Gah! What happened to her?!
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 3 . 3/13
Always waiting for dire circumstances.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 2 . 3/13
If he hadn't left her, HE could have changed her!
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 3/12
Hmm... Interesting. Why do I imagine
that Bella is 'the gift' Maria is touting?
| beachdreamerslk chapter 33 . 3/7
Well written and developed story. Many tie-ins throughout. I like the spin on the original and the evolution of Bella & Edward. Thanks for sharing! And if you are not certain if you want to read this story, you should. Its worth it!
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/3
Downloaded via ficsave and read it all. This was great. Somehow you made the premise work, and i'm glad I took your word and read the first chapter before passing it by! I love what you did with bellas powers. I'm hopeful for a sequel!
| 2lulu2 chapter 39 . 1/15
Aw, best ending ever! I loved the perfect little glimpse into the future that it was. Loved seeing Abigail and Christopher, and loved hearing what the Cullen's we're now doing. And Kate and Garrett... Leah's news, who Seth is now...perfect. :)
Thank you for this truly amazing and epic story! It just wrapped me up and has absorbed all my thoughts these last several days. I'm so glad I decided to finally read it. It wasn't overwhelmingly angsty like I thought and I'm sorry I assumed. It was amazing. Thank you for this gift!
| 2lulu2 chapter 38 . 1/15
Woooowwww... So first of all Bella's 'thing' drove me crazy! It's hard to believe she couldn't respond. Well I guess that's not so hard to believe, but it's hard to believe she can come back from such a huge error when she was the key! And Carlisle... :( I think I knew it was going to happen. Charlie too. Anyway, great job km the chapter though. Some of the dialog felt off somehow (like it pulled me out of the story instead of how good dialog keeps you sucked in the whole time). But that was only a few sentences. I thought all the planning and carry out was pretty cool. Nice battle. Can't imagine how you thought of it all!
| 2lulu2 chapter 36 . 1/14
Emmett's thing in the beginning of this chapter was awesome! And my eyes are all misty here with the ending. Your story is so well done! And I really want to thank you for not having detailed sex scenes. There is so much story to tell, they don't need to be pornos. I'm always relieved to find authors who align with my thoughts.
| 2lulu2 chapter 35 . 1/14
Amazing chapter. You're a great writer. :)