|Reviews for The Fallout|
| meelee729697 chapter 39 . 7/15/2013
Well that was one of THE very best stories I've ever read. It broke my heart alot, but they can't all be hunky dorey, after getting past intial obsticales.. So so SO very well done. I'm bummed that it's over.
Loving that vampires, humans, & wolves can all live together in harmony. :) .. Yes, they have a fight ahead, but I have faith that will wk itself out. - It was nice to see Abigail & Christopher there at the end. They definately deserve some happiness.
The loss of the loved ones still stings, but they are being honored beautifully, & as always, life must go on.
FanFlippinTabulous, woman! Loved it all the way thru. - I haven't said nearly enough...
Hope... yea, I like that. :)
| meelee729697 chapter 38 . 7/15/2013
Holy damn! That was muther effing bad ass. Damn! I've never read anything like that. Whoa.
- I accepted Charlie's death, much as I hated it, but I'm having a much harder time w/ Carlisle's... I can remind myself that we're in an alternate universe, but that barely helps. :/ - I understand tho, that war comes w/ a price, w/ losses. ... still hard.
- That was EPIC, tho... Pure awesomeness. I was completely engrossed.
... Last chapter, comin up..
| meelee729697 chapter 37 . 7/15/2013
Uugghhhh! Stobborn ass Charlie Swan! Dammit! - But, he's a strong man, & I know that's what he really wanted. I can find comfort in that & that he died truly happy, having his family w/ Seth, Leah, & Sue, & especially finding Bella again. But, still the heartbreak is there. :/
U have done a fantastic job so far w/ the battle. Not many writers, as great as I have found so many to be, can write a battle scene. -Superb.
Great job drving me crazy, woman! :))
| meelee729697 chapter 36 . 7/14/2013
Phew. That was good.
Edward at the piano & Esme singing Ave Maria, brought me to tears, & Calrisle at the pulpit had me hanging on every word, making me feel like one of the humans there listening.
| JustAFan chapter 39 . 7/14/2013
Such a beautiful and heartwarming story. Perfect name for the settlement.
| meelee729697 chapter 34 . 7/13/2013
Well, well, well. - That was not quite how I saw that going, but that's what I love about it. - Aro, the ultimate A-hole from Hell. Shoulda known. - But, I think our vamps & wolves will figure it out, AND the Volturi may just be sorry.
I love how u set up similar situations (from SM books), yet they are brand new.. different. Very well done.
- "Enough" & "I am no one's." - I like ur Bella.
Probably didn't touch on enough, but I have to put the story down & go to work, dammit! (I'll be reading in between waiting tables) :) teehee.
Can't wait to see what the heck!
| meelee729697 chapter 33 . 7/13/2013
Oooohhhhhhh, here we go! ...
| meelee729697 chapter 32 . 7/12/2013
I think I see an interesting twist coming. I bet the Volturi will be on team CuLLeN/WoLf.. could be wrong, we shall see.
- "The last thing I need is for Jacob to watch me get my ass handed to me by Bella.." :) lololol.
Happy for Charlie & Bella's reunion. Whoop!
- Man, Bella'a journal is just haunting, isn't it..? I can't believe I once thought it'd be Jasper to end Maria. Humgh! Think we know the answer to that one.
Great flow, yo. ;)
| meelee729697 chapter 31 . 7/12/2013
Holy flippin sh*t, I knew it was coming, but it it still floored me! - U set that up so damn well.
Great, great chapter. As usual.
| meelee729697 chapter 30 . 7/12/2013
The end of this chapter was beautiful. I LOVE that it wasn't a lemon. I enjoy the lovin, but I don't need the hardcore details, & this was so well done. The best I've read, actually.
- I love that the vamps & wolves will have to come together & prepare for battle, like in Eclipse & gather more, like Breaking Dawn.
I feel for Jacob, but he'll get over it. I know he's just happy Bells is "alive." - He can open up & love Leah now.
- Can't wait til Charlie finds out everything, surely he will.
... Also, many chapters back, forgot to say how much I love the way Garrett gives Bella a type of flower to ensure his return to her. That's beautyful. :)
| meelee729697 chapter 29 . 7/11/2013
Great chapter, loved the much needed fun. :)
But, the ending... Uh-Oh!
| meelee729697 chapter 28 . 7/11/2013
Literally cried at Bella & Alice's reuinon. So sweet. Loved them crashing into each other before any words were said.
I imagine the wolves & vamps will have to unite soon, to defeat Maria... - Still just as curious as the Cullens are about the Volturi.
- I wonder if Garrett is holding out w/ Kate because of his loyalties to Bella/Nix.
Loving the journal entries. Even tho it's terrible, it's a great way to see what happened down there all those years.
| meelee729697 chapter 26 . 7/10/2013
Omg, this story is amazingly, ridiculously fabulous . - What a journey for everyone!
I think it's neat that Garrett is Bella's Jacob in this alternate universe... I love him so much & love how close they are, but I feel so bad for him.. hope he finds love.
Let's continue, shall we..?
| meelee729697 chapter 24 . 7/10/2013
Ooo,Ooo,Ooo, gimme more!
| meelee729697 chapter 23 . 7/9/2013
OMGsh! Loving this shiz!
- I imagine, sooner or later, EvErYoNe is gunna go shut Maria'a ass down.