Reviews for The Fallout
KeeWit chapter 19 . 3/14/2014
Poor Jasper.
KeeWit chapter 20 . 3/14/2014
Thankfully, I have a vacation day today, because I stayed up all night to read this straight through.
KeeWit chapter 21 . 3/14/2014
I can't even imagine jasper having the courage to go back to Maria after having escaped her hell once before.
KeeWit chapter 22 . 3/14/2014
I really liked Isaac. Where in the world did you come up with the idea for him? I can just imagine you writing and suddenly thinking, "what this story really needs is a voodoo priest from the islands."
KeeWit chapter 23 . 3/14/2014
How was jasper still able to run, with 2 toes missing on each foot? I guess his normal vampire grace overcame the instability of his feet?
KeeWit chapter 24 . 3/14/2014
I am a little confused as to whether it was Victoria who staged Bella's death with the vagrant, or if it was Bella and Garrett.
KeeWit chapter 25 . 3/14/2014
Phoenix is a great name.
KeeWit chapter 26 . 3/14/2014
;-)
KeeWit chapter 27 . 3/14/2014
:-)
KeeWit chapter 28 . 3/14/2014
I wish I had taken the time to review every chapter when I read it, instead of waiting until the end. I would have been able to write something more profound.
KeeWit chapter 29 . 3/14/2014
Charlie is such a well-developed character in this story.
KeeWit chapter 30 . 3/14/2014
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KeeWit chapter 31 . 3/14/2014
Such a good story!
KeeWit chapter 32 . 3/14/2014
;)
KeeWit chapter 33 . 3/14/2014
I waited until this was complete to start reading it. I was afraid you wouldn't finish. It's so full of powerful emotions; I knew I would be so disappointed if the story wasn't completed.
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