Reviews for The Fallout
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 4 . 3/13/2015
Gah! What happened to her?!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 3 . 3/13/2015
Always waiting for dire circumstances.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 2 . 3/13/2015
If he hadn't left her, HE could have changed her!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
Hmm... Interesting. Why do I imagine
that Bella is 'the gift' Maria is touting?
beachdreamerslk chapter 33 . 3/7/2015
Well written and developed story. Many tie-ins throughout. I like the spin on the original and the evolution of Bella & Edward. Thanks for sharing! And if you are not certain if you want to read this story, you should. Its worth it!
Guest chapter 2 . 2/3/2015
Downloaded via ficsave and read it all. This was great. Somehow you made the premise work, and i'm glad I took your word and read the first chapter before passing it by! I love what you did with bellas powers. I'm hopeful for a sequel!
2lulu2 chapter 39 . 1/15/2015
Aw, best ending ever! I loved the perfect little glimpse into the future that it was. Loved seeing Abigail and Christopher, and loved hearing what the Cullen's we're now doing. And Kate and Garrett... Leah's news, who Seth is now...perfect. :)

Thank you for this truly amazing and epic story! It just wrapped me up and has absorbed all my thoughts these last several days. I'm so glad I decided to finally read it. It wasn't overwhelmingly angsty like I thought and I'm sorry I assumed. It was amazing. Thank you for this gift!
2lulu2 chapter 38 . 1/15/2015
Woooowwww... So first of all Bella's 'thing' drove me crazy! It's hard to believe she couldn't respond. Well I guess that's not so hard to believe, but it's hard to believe she can come back from such a huge error when she was the key! And Carlisle... :( I think I knew it was going to happen. Charlie too. Anyway, great job km the chapter though. Some of the dialog felt off somehow (like it pulled me out of the story instead of how good dialog keeps you sucked in the whole time). But that was only a few sentences. I thought all the planning and carry out was pretty cool. Nice battle. Can't imagine how you thought of it all!
2lulu2 chapter 36 . 1/14/2015
Emmett's thing in the beginning of this chapter was awesome! And my eyes are all misty here with the ending. Your story is so well done! And I really want to thank you for not having detailed sex scenes. There is so much story to tell, they don't need to be pornos. I'm always relieved to find authors who align with my thoughts.
2lulu2 chapter 35 . 1/14/2015
Amazing chapter. You're a great writer. :)
2lulu2 chapter 34 . 1/14/2015
Wow, that was intense.
2lulu2 chapter 31 . 1/14/2015
Oooohhhh myyyy gosh! Lol, I was like so tense and just feeling wretched for Charlie and then the last line or so happened and I just laughed out loud for 2 minutes! Aw that was amazing.
2lulu2 chapter 30 . 1/14/2015
I may have cried.
2lulu2 chapter 29 . 1/14/2015
I agree, Jacob is retarded.
2lulu2 chapter 23 . 1/13/2015
Finallllllyyyyyyy!
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