Reviews for Someone That You're With
katdemon1895 chapter 3 . 10/31/2009
congrats on your little one, awesome choice of name and this was an excellent chapter, and i'm wondering if all of keiko's eating might be for another reason besides stress, once again i'm extremely glad that yusuke is being shown that keiko can do a heck of a lot better than him and the wedding dress is beautiful, thanks for the link instead of just describing it

definately looking forward to when you next update
Ceaselessfall chapter 3 . 10/1/2009
I have to admit that I never expected that Hiei and Keiko could be together, and good luck with your baby! :3
HeavenRose chapter 3 . 9/28/2009
Fantastic update! I am still really enjoying the story. You have a very creatvie idea going on here. And you totally don't suck! This was well worth the wait!

Thanks for the great update :)

Looking forward to more!
cartoonfire chapter 3 . 9/27/2009
lol i loved the ending! it was so funny! poor yusuke, hehe

“Fatty fatty two by four, can’t fit through the kitchen door,” - love that line

awesome chappie :)
chocolatefudgecake chapter 3 . 9/27/2009
Oh. My. GOSH! I just frigging love this chapter! :) Hahaha! When I watched YYH again and they mentioned the stones when they were rescuing Yukina, BOOM! I figured it was Hiei. But I commented before that it was Kurama. Haha! I so love this chapter and I'm hoping you;d update soon. I really love this story. Keep up the good work and more power! :D

PS. Sorry. I was too lazy to login. :D
ChibiLady chapter 3 . 9/25/2009
WOOT! I loved that chapter, thankies for updating again. This chapter was a bit adult though.
Death101- Fox Version chapter 3 . 9/25/2009
... Is it so wrong that Yusuke's last statement amused me greatly? Awesome job! I never saw that coming! Please update soon and congrates!

-D101
HereAfter chapter 3 . 9/25/2009
I love what you've got going here. This is the perfect combo of couples for me, since Yusuke/Keiko is my favorite canon pairing and Hiei is my favorite character.

You right wonderfully and love the way you characterize Yusuke. His thought process is hilarious. The whole 'dream Keiko'/'real' Keiko thing made me laugh.

So, keep up the good work. I can't wait to read the next chapter (permitting that your pregnancy allows you to write it).
Serenity12 chapter 3 . 9/25/2009
aww, poor Yusuke! Well, it's what he gets! Wonderful chapter, and congrats on the baby boy! )
Kaori Minamino chapter 3 . 9/24/2009
Ouch...that sucks for Yusuke. Perfect song choice! Plus, love that song.

It has to be hell. I mean, besides the fact she's hotter than he usually notices, Hiei's all up IN that? And you can't get away? Oh man it sucks to be him.

Tell you one thing, I think Keiko's gonna get the night of her life if he ever gets back.

And Hiei might have a date with a Spirit Gun...Until next time!

Kaori _
Ceaselessfall chapter 2 . 9/5/2009
I don't understand o_0 which who is getting married Keiko?
Yusuke Urameshi - Mazoku chapter 2 . 7/12/2009
Please update soon and good luck with the baby!
katdemon1895 chapter 2 . 7/1/2009
this is looking really good! i was always a little irked by the way yusuke took keiko for granted, in his defense the story does start when he's just 14 and boys take awhile to mature but still

defaintely looking forward to where this is going to go and loving how it's gone so far, please update soon!
iamselena chapter 2 . 6/25/2009
Who? Who is the guy? Kurama? :)) Hahahaha! I am so damn curious. :) How about an update soon? :))

PS. Morning sickness is a bitch.
iamselena chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
Dude, this is so amazing! Man, you got the woman's personality and words hands down! I applaud you! :) Nice beginning.
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