|Reviews for His Family|
| adda edwards chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
I like the concept of Riley being apart of the Gates family. Where are you going to take it? Have Emily and Patrick divorced or did they stay married?
I'm really interested in seeing what you do. I love your Emily and Patrick stories!
| Superotter chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
Great start...I really like this story and I love Riley centered stories, especially when they include the Gates family looking out for him. I don't know how much help I would be with writing this, but I would be more than happy to offer feedback for any ideas you might have...warning though I love Riley Angst
| LoremIpsum chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
First off, his name is spelled RILEY! _ You should go back and fix that.
AW! This is so absolutely adorable. I love how you wrote Emily and when she was saying that Riley is like her son. This is unique because they are indirectly talking about him! I hope you continue with it :D