Incoming from 2016. I'm sure you don't even visit this story anymore, but just wanted to put it out there, that I loved the fic. Thank you for slaying the fanfic doubters.

Ohhh, you will never update this amazing story?

Wow. I love it! I would Implore you to write more. :-) ill even pimp ya out on Facebook lol. So...what happens next? *wink*

Y u stop?

I'll say one thing about this story, this is the most real, unfettered, tangible and conflicted relationship I've read in fanfic. I'm sad there isn't more, but I thank you for sharing.

I wish you had written this longer so I could enjoy the tension even longer! Well written, so smooth. Great characters. Thank you.

More please!

Edward was really raised up old school. I feel bad for him, it can be extremely difficult to break away from the feelings attached to such an upbringing. I really hope u have a HEA for these two men, cos damn I've read some sad fics with Jasper and Edward. Is ur entire story going to solely be in Edward's POV?

More? Why did you stop? this is an excellent and interesting story, very well written and it is a shame not to finish it. Please begin where you left off and finish your story.

I miss this story. Any update soon?

I'm quite pleased with how that ended, how Edward decided to veiw things;though I did find myself wishing for more.

I know I'm a year or two late, but your descriptive is good—I don't like descriptive for the most part, but was really pulled in here. It fit the scene!

I was a bit affronted when Edward nearly said what he did—but I do know it wasn't you. However, I have some soap over here, if he'd just step a little closer…!

I'm quite enjoying this—glad I decided to dig for a new read!

With only 4 chapters in you have me completely hooked to this story. I noticed that you haven't updated in a long time, is that to say that you've given up on it then? You're a fantastic writer regardless.