|Reviews for songs of sunken starlight starbrights|
| Aesshen chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
I'm a little bit confused by this. You seem to be implying that the "wars" in South America were taking place before the appearance of Heaven's Gate. Is this really how it went? I thought that Heaven's and Hell's Gates appeared 10 years before the series, and most people became Contractors then or not very long after. Pai became a Contractor and Hei followed her to the Syndicate, etc. I don't remember anything from the show about people becoming Contractors in the middle of the fight. Anyway, I really, really enjoyed this fic, but the confused timeline just bugged me too much to really love it, which is too bad because you write wonderfully and I like what you're going for here.
| Dear4Life chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
I liked your writing style for this. A quick trip down memory lane for Hei.
I enjoyed it. :)