Reviews for The very first time
littlejunebug chapter 2 . 11/30/2009
as angela would put it: "that's kinda hot" .. forget the 'kinda', this was an AMAZING read ! loved it
DBCrazy chapter 2 . 4/26/2009
That was a very nice first time!
boothlovesbrennan chapter 2 . 4/2/2009
wow you could pretty much feel the love...Lol i liked on writing
JadeAlmasy chapter 2 . 4/1/2009
Hey Awesome job on this!

Jade
amyylasee chapter 2 . 3/29/2009
these 2 stories have been amazing!

the way you capture the characters is brilliant

and these capters were great, that end line

when she sed 'i love you' was what it needed, she finely realised what is was like to love & make love to someone!

you are a exellent writer i hope you write more

very, very soon!

i will be reading (:

keep writing xoxox
bb-4ever chapter 2 . 3/28/2009
excellent 2nd part. they finally became 1. look forward to more from you
bones83 chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
WOW Enough said!
crazycamera chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
lovely
HawkAngel XD chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
aw! really cuute

HawkAngel
csimesser1 chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
that was great loved it
BonesnBooth chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
That was amazing I so missed these 2 chapters and just found out they existed
mwalter1 chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Hot scene! Very well written.
csimesser1 chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
that was good
crazycamera chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
all i can say is wow!
Coilerfan35 chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
SMEXY!
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