|Reviews for The very first time|
| littlejunebug chapter 2 . 11/30/2009
as angela would put it: "that's kinda hot" .. forget the 'kinda', this was an AMAZING read ! loved it
| DBCrazy chapter 2 . 4/26/2009
That was a very nice first time!
| boothlovesbrennan chapter 2 . 4/2/2009
wow you could pretty much feel the love...Lol i liked on writing
| JadeAlmasy chapter 2 . 4/1/2009
Hey Awesome job on this!
| amyylasee chapter 2 . 3/29/2009
these 2 stories have been amazing!
the way you capture the characters is brilliant
and these capters were great, that end line
when she sed 'i love you' was what it needed, she finely realised what is was like to love & make love to someone!
you are a exellent writer i hope you write more
very, very soon!
i will be reading (:
keep writing xoxox
| bb-4ever chapter 2 . 3/28/2009
excellent 2nd part. they finally became 1. look forward to more from you
| bones83 chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
WOW Enough said!
| crazycamera chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
| HawkAngel XD chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
aw! really cuute
| csimesser1 chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
that was great loved it
| BonesnBooth chapter 2 . 3/27/2009
That was amazing I so missed these 2 chapters and just found out they existed
| mwalter1 chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Hot scene! Very well written.
| csimesser1 chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
that was good
| crazycamera chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
all i can say is wow!
| Coilerfan35 chapter 1 . 3/25/2009