|Reviews for VOYAGER: Unaltered|
| pennyd chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
Terrific story, I could envision it as I read. Thank you!
| PCBW chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
loved this one. nice work and such a lovely scenario. thanks a mil
| KJaneway115 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
This is beautifully written and your style is very poetic.
| sohappytolove chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
This was so sweet and completely in character. The ending they should have had. Thanks for writing!
| razraz chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
I was hoping to send you thanks for you reviews of my stuff and couldn't instead I found this story and loved it. I have never seen Endgame and given Chakotay heading off into the sunset with Seven don't think I want to. However now that I have read this I may be brave enough to watch it. I loved how you described his neediness without making him sound weak(not too weak anyway). And Kathryn is just so Kathryn - I could see this playing out perfectly. I love this line, "Chakotay remembered the desire in her voice and the promise in her eyes." - could be for him could be for the lake, could be for both. raz
| LynnEGib chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
I love how descriptive you write. Thank you
| Captain Weirdo chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
Gorgeous story - you are a talented writer. Loved it.
| Yuti-Chan chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
| Woadangel chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
I loved that all the angst and "talk" was done in Chakotay's mind. Instead, the real conversation was done in few words, because these two KNOW each other. Simply awesome.
| mab13j chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
A fine story, MarMar. The introspective Chakotay was quite realistic, particularly early on. I didn't like the "begging" too much, but I like your writing enough to go read what else is out there!
| QContinuum chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
A beautiful, sweet and very emotional story. Your insights on Chakotays feeling were totally in character which is a hard thing to see these days.
Thanks for the delightfull reading.
| Tarika Nachtwind chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
How very, very sweet! Thank you.
| Cheshire6845 chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
A wonderfully written and warm scene. I like to think this is how they ended up.
| TJ87 chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
Great story . The best ending I have read yet!
| LoZDisneyVG fan chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
This is good you chose my favourite Shakespeare's sonnet- a very clever story based on that sonnet. Sometimes I wandered if Kathryn could somehow sense Chakotay's thoughts...