|Reviews for Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights|
| TwilightVampire92 chapter 7 . 4/6/2009
haha yay, you used my word Stalkward! ;D
and i love how Andy used it, too funny. i actually liked the JPoV part, which is funny, because i'm usually not one to anything other than E and BPoV. :P
i also love the fact that the guys are gunna be at the bar the same time the Femmes are, that should be interesting...i can totally see Edward pummeling a guy for hitting on Bella or something like that.
Anywho, great chapter like always, and grats on 100 reviews! :D
update again soon!
| lildv274 chapter 7 . 4/6/2009
lol good chapter... i love the name of it! hope you can update sooN!
| gumibear26 chapter 7 . 4/6/2009
I like the start of Jasper and Alice's relationship. Why couldn't Edward and Bella have it so good? I'll tell you why - it's not as much fun that way. Edward is much more fun when he is messed up in the head and trying to figure out how to get his head out of his a**. (Although I wouldn't be4 opposed to it coming out sooner rather than later...)
Keep up the good work!
| flecour chapter 7 . 4/6/2009
Great story so far! )
| Esmi76 chapter 7 . 4/6/2009
I love it! I know from experience that you may have a plan but the characters will tell you what to do and you cant help it... I know from my experience that Jasper is a persistent one and will do things you really hadn't planned on lol it has to be his way... I love the new chapter and am eagerly -as always- waiting for the next chapter!
| dreamngo4it9 chapter 7 . 4/6/2009
i really liked this chapter
i liked the inclusion of jasper and alice's relationship
i cant wait for the night out and the drama to come
| akiyan chapter 7 . 4/6/2009
all i want to say is... Update update update! Awesome story! :)
| Navygirl14 chapter 7 . 4/6/2009
I can't wait for bar drama. This is going to be good. If I could kick Edward's ass I would. I am really enjoying this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| lolapink17 chapter 7 . 4/6/2009
I love Alice and Jasper, they are so cute! I can't wait to read about the girls' night! Love the story, keep writing and uploading! XOXO
| sparkle86 chapter 7 . 4/6/2009
Can't wait for the Femmes night out! Love this story. Update soon :)
| kolfan88 chapter 7 . 4/6/2009
Please post the next chapter! I can't wait for the drama to begin LOL
| gumibear26 chapter 6 . 4/5/2009
I love all the insights on Bella's character that you give us in this chapter. Of course, we know that she is caring and compassionate, but it's all the tidbits like these that make the story special.
Totally loved peeping tom Edward.
I like your OC's, especially Mama Dooly. Looks like she became kind of asurragate mom to Bella once she was old enough to come into the bar. I'm sure the boys talked her ear off about Bella when she was younger.
How long do you think this story will run - I'm ready for some action!
| aspire2write chapter 6 . 4/5/2009
I love your story. I think it's great to watch Edward become aware of his feelings for Bella. I can't wait to see the girls night out.
On a side note, if you google "seth clearwater" pictures of the groom from that video show up. Maybe you're right. Can't wait for a new chapter.
| Esmi76 chapter 6 . 4/4/2009
This is an awesome chapter! sorry I haven't reviewed yet I read it on my blackberry. lol
| vronvy chapter 6 . 4/4/2009
Ha! Cockblockers! That is so funny! I am a HUGE Pink fan too. I am glad you put that song in there. Katy Perry's Hot and Cold-good choice as well. I can totally see that being Edward. He needs to make up his mind already!
I read your a/n and only read as far as where you wrote that the guy could be a pack member before I looked up the video. As soon as I saw the guy, I thought "Seth". Then, I finished reading your a/n and saw that you said Seth too. We think alike, I guess. Another great chapter.