|Reviews for El Diablo es en mi pantalones|
| Karkitty will eat you chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
THe verb form is estar, and the conjugated forms are: estoy, estas, esta, estamos, estais, estan. Sorry. I can be a bit of a spelling/grammar Nazi when it comes to Spanish. Sorry. But other than that, IS PERFECT AND REALLY FUCKING CUTE! I can't write lemons, 'cause I'm always afraid someone will get a hold of my fanfiction noteboook, or else my flashdrive (which is carried around my neck and I really have no reason to be afraid someone will get hold of it) that I save everything to. But I can read them. And it...is... Awesomeful!
| CHICKENNODDLEFTW chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
I Feel Shame...
| DeeaE chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
| Kimiko Asahara chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
what does this mean I'll fuck you senseless if you give suck me, Dei i don't get it
| Charlene Heo chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
OMG, LUV THIS! xDDD
| ARE YOU TOBI APPROVED chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
u should really do a sequel! plz oh plz do a sequel this is my favorite story i've read it over 20 time. (literally i've kept count i've read it 31 times.) anyway u should do 1 like at school where they announce it and like u no make everyone know its official. or just at his house. XD plz plz plzy?
| M.S chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
as an spanish, I got to say that the title is bad written. It has to be "El Diablo en mis Pantalones."
| Ludmila-Chan chapter 1 . 12/26/2009
Sorry for the short Review u.u
| yokosfangirl chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
You did pretty good with the story. I just want to say that you misspelled necesito, not necisito. Just advice if you're going to use Spanish in any other stories. Otherwise it's awesome.
| UrNeighborhoodCreeper chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
good job elaine.
*sniff* im so proud!
| ImTtlyTheHero chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
*nosebleed* O/O that's... awesome...
| Sasukeliker1 chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
-estan is the 'they' form of estar-the verb 'to be'.
_estar:estaoy, estas, esta, estamos, astan
-trabajo is the 'self or yo' form of trabajar-the verb 'to work'
_trabajar:trabajo, trabajas, trabaja, trabajamos, trabajan
-tambien means 'also' or 'too' so the form doesn't change
-comer is 'to eat'
_comer:como, comes, come, comemos, comen
-nececitar is 'need to do'
_nececitar:nececito, nececitas, nececita, nececitamos, nececitan
-I don't know if ver is a Spanish word. you're probably thinking of 'ir' the verb 'to go'
_ir:vo, vas, va, vamos, van
-juego-you're probably thinking of jugar 'to play'
Sorry. I'm taking Spanish right now, going on to Spanish 2 next year and I just couldn't but correct you. Sorry.
| Boehmei chapter 1 . 5/8/2009
That was pretty good for a first lemon! I enjoyed it, keep going. :)
| Destination-sky chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Gah! Sasori is teh Sex-God! LOL! I so agree with that! :D
I really enjoyed it! You're a good writer! /
| jadedfox2 chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
omg, that was ur first lemon? IT WAS GREAT! VERY WELL DONE!