Reviews for You Will Obey MePart Two
Dil9 chapter 5 . 11/8/2011
Wow what a story:)
candycakkkes chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
hey,'firstly i absolutely love your writing ability, and am in no way flaming you. i'm just giving you some helpful tips, i think you're getting WASTE and WAIST confused.


"She hooked her finger into the waste of my jeans and pulled me closer."


1. to consume, spend, or employ uselessly or without adequate return; use to no avail or profit; squander: to waste money; to waste words.


1. the part of the body in humans between the ribs and the hips, usually the narrowest part of the torso.
keyecullen chapter 5 . 2/3/2011
Well Part Two was just as good at Part One. Maybe better!

Keye chapter 5 . 6/5/2010
this story is so hot buh i rekkon she shud av a propa spankin

gd story at least mi perverted mind finks so lol!

Bexxie xx
fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night chapter 5 . 3/14/2010
loved it
Furious Strength chapter 5 . 2/14/2010
You made the sub in me very, very happy. Please write more Dom/sub oriented Edward and bella stories. A nice, rough over the knee spanking before sex would be amazing!
spartangirl03 chapter 5 . 11/19/2009
Wow that was fucking hot ! Angry sex is always the best !
spartangirl03 chapter 4 . 11/19/2009
Lmao ...damn everytime they r getting better this stupid mongrel interrupts...ugh
spartangirl03 chapter 3 . 11/19/2009
Lol charlie was funny...damn him for interrupting ...
spartangirl03 chapter 2 . 11/19/2009
Wow my answer to that would of been just do it. ..lmao
spartangirl03 chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
He always over thinks too much
4everhis91 chapter 5 . 11/12/2009
Well ... i hope that puts the whole Jacob thing 'behind' them LOL :) It was a fantastic stong lemon ... I'd call it an electric lemonade :)
4everhis91 chapter 4 . 11/11/2009
OME ... they r lost in an angry sex loop ... wait ... that sounds fun LOL no really ur doing a great job with the story ... the lemons are flowing ... I just hope it leads to a good place with balance in the end :)
4everhis91 chapter 3 . 11/11/2009
So they r figuring it out ... angry make-up sex is wonderful but then u get to deal with it the next day ... yep ... welcome to adult like kiddos
4everhis91 chapter 2 . 11/11/2009
now that an Edward style breakfast! :)
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