|Reviews for No Leaf Clover|
| AEON chapter 7 . 8/10/2011
please update soon!
| Sokulski chapter 7 . 7/18/2011
Oh for the love of god please continue! O.O
| Sokulski chapter 4 . 7/18/2011
| redshell234 chapter 7 . 8/24/2009
Yet another great story from you. As usual, you meet my expectations of surpassing the last story of yours that I read. Having the Leon/Ada interaction and...strained relationship seems to add a dynamic to the story that I haven't ever seen before. Hat's off to you for that. Since really all this is is ass-kissing, I'd like to offer my services as a beta-reader, if you don't have one by now. I haven't noticed many typos in your fanfiction, though what I have noticed is words that sound the exact same, such as steal/steel.
| RevolutionZwei chapter 7 . 4/26/2009
As much as you hate me saying "dust in the wind", you say it in your story...I knew it. I knew it was too awesome for you to deny...XDD...but how dare you call it stupid? XD...that's the song title too, right? I mean...I know it's a song, but I don't know if it's the one you were referring to...
Ahh, I want to know why Leon left! Because he was afraid? Come on man...that's no way to react. This tension between Leon and Ada is killing me...and now the kiss. While I'm happy about the kiss, I want to punch Chris for interrupting. Why does everybody feel the need to interrupt them?
Man...I'm sure Chris and the gang feel...just worthless because of Ada's remarks lol. I like how they shuffled out with their shoulders hung low and such. That's what they get for interrupting the night before though. And I really like how you did little scenes from the POV of birds. Always interesting to get an animal's take on the situation at hand.
Oh Sherry...Sherry, Sherry...poor Sherry. God only knows where she is lol. Leon certainly looked like he'd seen a ghost though. Can't really blame him for that lol. Will she be rescued? I'm going to say yes...you can't just mention Sherry and then say that's it lol. I'll bet she's in the lab on Buldir, right? I'm right, aren't I? Yeah...I'm right lol. Probably not, but that's normal. I'll keep my crazy theories...
Anyway, this was a really cool addition to the NLC saga lol...this story is coming along awesomely! The tension though...it's still killing me. Kiss again, please! Ahh, that won't happen...not for a while, right? lol...I guess I gotta wait until the update to find out...
| Dragonthunder89 chapter 7 . 4/23/2009
Bringing Steve and Sherry into it eh? A nice twist, well this was excellent as always. I hope you update soon!
| Dhuaine chapter 7 . 4/19/2009
Excellent chapter. I finally caught up with this fanfic last night, and no doubt the next update will send me dropping whatever I'm doing and rushing here to read the new chapter.
This story is a masterpiece I love all these intertwining threads, especially that this story looks like it's going to be really long. So far you've done a terrific job keeping them all solid and consistent. The amount of description and the pace of the story are very good. When reading something particularly gripping and well-written, I have a bad habit of taking a peek at the later pages. It rarely occurs with fanfiction, but here I just couldn't resist. It speaks for itself.
The plot sucks readers inside and doesn't let them go. I was genuinely concerned about the characters (you even made me care about Chris XD). The plot twists were all out of the blue - just when one thinks the situation is bad enough, it gets even worse.
Chapter 7 either served as a kind of refuge, a pause to comprehend what's happening, or I've become more numb to the shock.
The only qualm I have about this story are 'word errors', i.e. 'peek' instead of 'peak' etc. They're disturb the reading flow a bit, especially in chapters 5 and 6, but it's nothing major.
Thank you so much for sharing this story with us! _
| MarnaLouw89 chapter 7 . 4/18/2009
*gasp* Dammit what a great chapter! LOL Leon smoking, oh boy..Ada's reaction to that would have been awesome to see XD
Haha...Leon giving Ada that cold look in the beginning only to get a wink back was freaking hilarious!
Oh that flashback! awesomness! Hell everything in this chap makes me giddy as hell!
Thanx my friend! I loved it soo very much!
| Af Spirit chapter 3 . 4/17/2009
Glad to see Ada and Leon team up. Update soon!
| Af Spirit chapter 2 . 4/17/2009
This is pretty good still. That's a nice Rifle Leon has. I think I am starting to like this more and more.
I agree with you about the brunette/blonde thing. Jill looked better with her original color. I also like how you described Sheva's feelings about Africa and New York. I have been to both of those places.
I would reference both as places to visit. (Well don't go to the Islamic countries in Africa cause they treat females bad but everywhere else in the homeland is cool.)
I have warmed up to Sheva since beating RE 5.
Hope you can drop a review by my way when u get a chance.
| midwintersoul chapter 3 . 4/17/2009
This story definitely deserves more reviews mate ;). Pretty scary when Chris recieved that phone call. Random dude/chick calls up, threatens you and cancels their number wtf? I just can't wait to find out who's behind the call and I hope that Chris can get to them pretty soon.
| Dragonthunder89 chapter 6 . 4/15/2009
Hey Alaska, I see you put up a few more chapters. I think this story is excellent as always. I agree with your gripe about the reviews lol. Don't feel too bad though it's like pulling teeth to get people to review my Leon/Ada story lol. Anyway keep up the good work!
| RevolutionZwei chapter 6 . 4/14/2009
Sweet...what an awesome chapter lol. Seriously...I'm loving the fact that Leon and Ada finally got to meet up with Chris, Jill, and Sheva. Another reason they shouldn't go searching for the scream would be because of Leon and Ada's damp clothes lol...they should probably get out of the cold ASAP and relax for a little bit.
Oh man, how the hell did the infection spread to Washington D.C.? Ashley's mom got infected? That's crazy...it spread so fast. This is kinda reminiscent of TAB lol.
Oh, the Leon/Ada moments were all awesome! I can't believe that Ada just jumped in after him man! Is she nuts? I mean, I can see why she would do that, but damn...that's like a deathwish for normal people like us lol. (And the T-Rex easter egg...cute DJ...real cute...XDD...done with Jurassic Park are you? XD)
Ooh nice way to bring Becky back in too...this plot is crazy awesome. Mainly because the infection in ALaska is spreading like wildfire, and this plot is pretty much on par with TAB's lol. Assuming Leon can make it out intact with both of his arms in working condition...XD...Oh, and he needs to kiss poor Ada's hurt fingers. That's the least he can do...(what a cute scene it would be lol). And by the way, when Jill and the rest met the hobo, I laughed. Hard. lol...because I thought he knew where Leon was for some reason...XD
Anyway, I hearted this chapter lots! Such an excellent addition to an awesome ass story! And I still don't care about the length at all lol. Can't wait until Saturday!
| MarnaLouw89 chapter 6 . 4/14/2009
Holy shit, holy shit HOLY SHIT! *jumps on you*
THANK YOU!Thank you so much!
What an awesome thing to come home to. Geez DJ...my friend...brilliant i am telling you! Those awesome A/L moments...i am speechless!
I LOVE IT SO MUCH!
*goes to read it again*
| RichRider chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Wow! Jason was right. This story seems like its going to be epic. I love how well written this chapter is. I also like that you incorporated lyrics at the beginning.
Felt bad for Chris. After all that crap he went through in Kijuju, he has to explain to the public about what happened. One man standing alone isnt fun at all.
So the President wants to talk to Chris. I wonder what he is going to ask him about or talk to him about. Cant wait for that part.
That poor guy on the train in the bar. I have to see whats going to happen to him. I also like how your putting in New York and Alaska in the story. I cant wait to see where you take this whole story.
And I'd like to see Chris be with Jill because thats one of my fav pairings, but judging from your avatar, looks like he's going to be with Sheva? I have nothing against Sheva but Jill is just better.
Anyway, great chapter and update soon (_)