|Reviews for Vespertine|
| Farewellheart chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
Well, I don't usually review fanfics...I guess I'm a quiet critic. I have to say though, your stories are absolutely awesome! I've read dozens upon dozens of Naruto fanfics and so far I haven't come across anyone who can pull it off quite like you do.
Not only can you keep the characters realistic, and IN character..the story lines are engaging and always a good read. I'll think I'll go as far as saying that you'd make an awesome original fiction writer as well!
Keep up the amazing work :)
(P.s. this story is addictive already! I check twice a day for updates, haha what a cliffie.)
| Favored chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
Once you mentioned his illness that makes him cough up blood, I knew that it was Itachi... Well, that, and the 'ItaSaku' in the summary, lol. XD
| Line chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
Great,I love your ItaSaku please please PLEASE don't turn this one into a DeiSaku fic.I beg you.
Can't wait for more.
| underthefog chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
got me from osaka to tokyo haneda, and then from haneda to narita airport. now write enough to get me from montreal to san francisco this may
| Frozen Darkness 88 chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
| Joukou chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Yes! Another one. I've been waiting for your to post your next story for a while now. There haven't been any good Itachi/Sakura stories that I can get into lately... I was really happy when I saw your had posted this. I have high hopes for it, and look forward to the next chapter! It's already good. :)
| Bethany Shiver chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
I will most definitely read more if you post it. This could be interesting. I've never read of them meeting quite like this and it intrigues me. please continue.
| ronny-of-yore chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Wah! For a moment there,like a tard, I was actually like, "No, don't let it be Sasuke!"
But, come on, I'm an idiot. I KNEW this was ItaSaku and I still said it. :facepalm
As for the story itself, I love the way you describe things. You have a deeper sense of your fics enviroments than I could ever manage.
And Sakura's maturity, even with this little, is shown by even the simplist of things: from her duty to pick up needed items directly for the Hokage ON HER OWN, to the way she politely carries herself in public.
I also love that fact that you didn't have her go all fangirlish,"Zomg, my love is in the next room! I must see him!" :foams at mouth:
You did it in a much more delicate way. I love your writing and I'm so looking forward to more. :D
| Zekya chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Wow, already off to an amazing start. But then, that's to be expected from you. I'm glad you've acknowledged the illness Itachi had. I myself speculated that it was tuberculosis or something of the likeness. I'm eagerly awaithing "The Bargain". Exquisite job as always.
| cc1358 chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Well, this is an unusual beginning. Another amazing story - congratulations. The summary is very promising - I can see you're taking a different path this time. I hope your own kind of drama and passion stays, but I am very eager to find out where the plot is going:D It may even make me start reading the manga again, because I dropped it a few months ago due to lack of time. Well, anyway - good luck with the story and may you have a pleasant and inspiration-filled day(:
| Sharzam chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
I think you might know more about the Naruto universe than any other writer in the history of the earth (minus kishimoto). please update!
| HardCritic chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
Well, it's not often I actually come into contact with a story that only has one chapter down so far and is written by a reliable author that I like, so I suppose I'll review each chapter. Great first chappie, and can't wait for your update! Good luck writing.
| nuclear.girl.6 chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
OMFG...(Dances in circles)...Great 1st chapter...loved it...I know this is going to be a fantastic story...
I really hope you update soon
| divine-chaos13 chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
hey, just wanna say good start. ur stories r always great. im looking forward to the rest of it! _
| divinemendy chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
oh interesting. its just the first chappie and im already in love. its looks like its gonna be great and im a big fan so i cant wait