|Reviews for A Dangerous Mind|
| yellowlightning chapter 3 . 12/27/2012
Well written. Although I shipped Edward/Bella, I always felt bad for Jacob about how things didn't quite work out for him with Bella. I admit it was hard to continue liking him during Eclipse when he got 'cocky' . . . So I like how you portray his hurt here. Its a nice way to build the storyline and characters.
| yellowlightning chapter 2 . 12/27/2012
My absolute favorite part of this chapter was when Alice talks about when she first envisioned Jacob. Thats the Jacob that grew on me as I read New Moon. It was nice to see u capture that through Alice. :) Great Writing!
| yellowlightning chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
I'm back! And as promised I'm here to review each chapter. I love the start to this story. Its short but it totally hooks from the beginning! I'm rereading each chapter. I'm excited to move on to chapter two!
| yellowlightning chapter 7 . 12/23/2012
I stayed up late to finish this entire story. I absolutely LOVED it. I've read nearly all the Alice and Jacob fanfics on this site and THIS story has to be one of the best (if not the best) stories I've read. You did an excellent job at keeping everyone in character that it makes the entire thing so believable. I plan to reread this story and leave a proper review for each chapter (you rightfully deserve it).
I hope you decide to continue this story. ) Pretty please? In the meantime keep up with the great writing!
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/10/2012
Wow, what an end on this chapter. It's really good! Please don't let this story die, it's great! Please continue!
| Oridara chapter 5 . 8/11/2012
"She squeezes his hand tighter, physical warmth seeping in her fingers; but this time, with a delight that heated her core. It flairs her frozen heart, and she takes predilection in it."
Aww, they're kinda starting to dig hard on each other right about now...
I like that Alice has a little bite to her that's different from Rosalie's bite. I like that I'm seeing more of Alice and I can see past the fashionista aspect of her. Alice is treating her existence as a second chance at life and is embracing fashion while doing it. Now I can understand where her pixy, sunny attitude comes from. So that must mean that vampires who lived in extreme poverty and deprivation enjoy being a vampire? Great chapter?
| Oridara chapter 4 . 8/11/2012
"Yawning, he felt his eyelids droop, sleep beginning to claim him fast, but not before his thoughts remembered pure gold burning above him whilst ice etched itself into his very skin." Very cool sensory details here. They really convey the depth of Alice and Jacob's brief physical encounter.
Wow, if Alice did wanna have an outside affair, she'd really have to leave seeing as Edward can read her mind and even worse...Jasper could feel what she'd beeen doing.
| Oridara chapter 3 . 8/11/2012
Uh-oh, Bella is missing Jacob still? What an interesting triangle that would be.
"He wanted to go for a ride on his, not so much for the thrill of the rush, but to remember how her laugh had been—it'd been loud and joyous, her smile wide as she raced with him on the dirt path, echoing in his ears. Though the light in Bella's brown eyes wasn't as bright, and her laughter held the twinges of bitterness, she still had laughed—with him, for him, because of him…"
I just can't stand it when Jacob goes through long periods of time with no relief in sight :(.
| Oridara chapter 2 . 8/11/2012
Jasper is super needy towards Alice- poor thing. And to think that Bella chooses this life knowing that she could have the same dilemmas as Jasper does. Nice chapter setting up the nature of Alice & Jasper's relationship. It seems that Alice could tire (if possible) of encouraging and watching over Jasper in the future.
| Oridara chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
It is very scary to see Alice with no vision of herself in the eternal bliss that she's accustomed to. Great little teaser! Very suspenseful. I am excited to see Alice with Jacob and Jacob with Alice. I think that Jacob would have liked Alice in another world where she wasn't vampire the same way he liked Bella. I hope this fic isn't abandoned...?
| nakala chapter 7 . 7/13/2011
i just found this lovely nugget and i love it i really like how you sped things up a bit but kept it slow at the same time also i hope you intend on finishing this fic in the future because it would be a waste to see it not be finished because it is so good and there are so many things set up to happen so please finish this fic please
| Pumitas chapter 7 . 7/24/2010
You must continue... you have a great story here.
| Twilightluver1966 chapter 7 . 5/15/2010
Excellent story so far! PLEASE keep updating! Alice/Edward and Alice/Jacob are my favorite pairings.
| Millennion chapter 7 . 5/8/2010
very enjoyable and well written.i love that its not rushed. i look forward to more
| Nightmarcher89 chapter 7 . 4/29/2010
This is GREAT! Jacob and Alice make a fine pairing, and the way you write their interactions tells me that you understand the characters down to a T.
Keep writing this story, please. I want to see the inevitable confrontation between Jasper and Alice about her going off to see Jacob.
Poor Jasper. At the same time, hell yes to Jacob/Alice.