Reviews for Do Not Let Anyone Know
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2016
Too many 'and' words in this story.
It's annoying to read something that says, for example:

He decided to do the right thing, so he helped Joey, and gave him a comfortable place to stay, and showed him to the bedroom he'd be sleeping in. Joey felt grateful and felt he did not deserve the kindness Seto was showing him. He did not know how'd he ever repay him and decided that he will find a way to pay him back, but right now he felt tired and thought he'd think of ways to repay him before going to sleep and went to sleep.

Do you see how the paragraph doesn't seem quite right? There is also too many "he said/she said". You need to retake English 101 before you write a story next time. Do a little homework first.
RainvowCookeStar chapter 11 . 5/24/2016
Please no inappropriate stuff, and also, were are his friends?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/3/2016
Love it
Ayamehanachi chapter 20 . 11/26/2011
I love your stories, they're very beautiful and touching. I also love that you write stories about same-sex couples and support same-sex marriage. I hope that Joey finds his way back, and into a family that cares about him. :)
Sakiq-Sakik chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
I really did cry when I read this! THANX! _
Sakiq-Sakik chapter 46 . 9/18/2009
OH MY KAMI! BEST STORY I READ THAT HAD ANGST IN IT EVER! thanx! _
YAOI addicted Kat chapter 25 . 6/25/2009
yep much better but next time try to shorten the med crap plz?
YAOI addicted Kat chapter 24 . 6/25/2009
nvm my last review i like it better now
YAOI addicted Kat chapter 23 . 6/25/2009
im sorry but when i am done reading this i am never reading another story by youto much med crap in this
YAOI addicted Kat chapter 19 . 6/25/2009
now it starting to get good
YAOI addicted Kat chapter 18 . 6/25/2009
eh
YAOI addicted Kat chapter 8 . 6/25/2009
like ozey osborn?
YAOI addicted Kat chapter 7 . 6/25/2009
eh
YAOI addicted Kat chapter 4 . 6/25/2009
still ify about this story
YAOI addicted Kat chapter 3 . 6/25/2009
good
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