Reviews for Never Be Mine
music51 chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
This is gorgeous! I disagree with the reviewers who thought it would be better if Sarah'd had more of a bond with people in the real world...I think it's perfect just the way you wrote it. :)
TashaRose chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
Amazing one shot. I was crying so hard at one point. I'm amazed how you ended it with a smile on my face. Bravo.
Bloodsired chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
That was lovely and bittersweet.
Cecelia.Lunette chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
My favorite line by far is. "We's getting drunks again!"
chrissydarkest chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
aww love this story so much read it loads of times now and still tear up as she starts forgetting xxx
FatesMistake chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
I love this story! Lol, it's really much better than the common bs one finds. I really really liked this, though the ending could've used a bit more...another chapter, where she's settling in fine as the new Queen.
hatsumei chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
"We're getting drunk again!"


It was really cute (and funny )!

I really enjoyed reading your story.
Mikado X Goddess chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
WOW! just read this fanfiction and I LOVE IT! you're an AWESOME writer!

~Mikado xx
misunderstoodemon chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
Yay! Love it, especially the image of Sarah partying with all the Underground beings. Keep it up!

Raiast chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
Yayyy! I was really really hoping that Jareth would wake to find her there!
lily chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
your a miracle i LOVE!
Ayjah chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
Lovely. Wonderful b
writertron chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
love it. it's all bittersweet with a wonderful ending.
Artscapades chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
I was worried for a moment there. But nope it ended brilliantly. Loving the goblin's line.
seldom chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
I love how Sarah and Jareth's relationship progresses and the way you tell it is great. Typically in stories, Jareth comes on to Sarah very strong, and Sarah is constantly questioning his trustworthiness. You've done it completely different - there's trust, respect, and friendship - and I still think it fits Jareth's character and I find it believable. I like that it's Sarah that initiates the first kiss. And while I enjoyed the first half of the story so much, their goodbye was so sad I almost didn't want to finish the rest. I actually did a quick peek toward the end to see if they would be reunited before I was sure I could read the whole thing. I wouldn't have been able to stand an unhappy ending. You definitely didn't disappoint. The ending was so sweet.

I agree with the other reviewers that wish Sarah could have had more meaningful relationships with her family and the other people around her. She should be able to find some people she could connect with and care for. I don't know if the story would be even more interesting that way. Regardless of that, I loved reading it all. Thanks for the excellent story!
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