Reviews for Complicated
xXxPersonaDevilxXx chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
Wow... I liked it. great job! : D This was extremely detailed from most stories I've read. I thought it was wonderful.
yarra chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Twotwentytwo chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
I liked it. I never really considered that Naoto really had no idea what love actually was beyond the word itself. It makes sense, though.

Souji IS a huge pain to try and figure out. The party's comments during the November dungeon's entrance show that they know him fairly well though(they encourage him as a big brother, knowing he's anxious/upset even if he doesn't show it. Also later making shallow excuses to let Souji visit the hospital).

Good stuff.
Azurerin chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Complicated, yes, it is... It's true that those kind of feelings are complicated. But I think you've done a good job on describing Naoto's feelings...
Oraman Asturi chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Interesting... So there are people out there that look into the MCs mind and find something more than just a character to bash and beat around. Well at least there seems to be for souji now if there was just one like that for minato. The MCs are quiet and soft spoken because their self-reflective and thoughtful not due to some mental defect. nuff 0of my rant though.
FlameOut chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Hm... this is different to what you usually writes. It's like a deep analysis of a character. Those are tough to do. I think you did pretty well on it. I enjoyed it and it flowed quite nicely together. )