|Reviews for The Fine Art of Intra Party Warfare|
| GrrHero chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
That was interesting. I've barely played any of the Baldur's Gate games, but I am an avid Dungeons & Dragons player and DM. The characters were full, well developed, and funny, even with the story being short. The dialogue was mostly good. There were a couple of flow issues. Instead of using parenthesis when the Gnome thinks about the examples of her species the author could simply use apostrophes, or just stay with the italics, and say Abjure thought. There was also no need to put parenthesis around the direction that the Gnome looks. Overall, worth a few minutes of reading for the hearty chuckles.
P.S. Bane's a loser!
| Mirach chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
lol, very frustrated gnome, and I can imagine why...