|Reviews for Deterioration of Reason|
| Sari Dark chapter 12 . 2/2
You are an amazing writer! Though it is a bit frightening how much pleasure you seem to get from the torture...I can't wait to read more!
| Crying. hARD chapter 12 . 12/2/2014
This made me feel true feels. True feels.
| Kameru chapter 2 . 5/20/2014
Gah! Sammy! How dare you! And to my little Cas too!
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/25/2013
That was a wonderful story. Couldn't stop reading it from beginning to end. So addicting. Poor Cas :( poor Gabriel. Can't wait to read more in the following story. :)
| GasMaskedSilence chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
You seem to like hurting poor Cas... And I love it! The show needs more Cas whump :/
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/4/2012
Poor Cas :(
You are really good! You should really write books for a living! I loved your writing!
| My name is a Mystery chapter 12 . 5/4/2012
You should've added ''Tragedy'' to the nice story although I don't think that Cas in his current state(a dead COMPLETELY torn apart...thing)wil be easy resurrecting xD
| Timey Wimey chapter 6 . 1/15/2012
Oh God, I hate Belial!
| dragoness simplicity chapter 12 . 12/17/2011
OMG! The ending! Wha.. Why... O
Anywho, it was a great story. I did find myself skipping quickly through chapters 7-8. The theme was a little too repeditive for me. But then again, I'm not much of a drama fan. So you must really be a good writer to hold my attention for so long XD
Here are some more annoying little notes, since you seem to looove feedback so much P
*Chap 1 You have a separation line before 'They pulled apart to gasp for air and Ruby smirked..' I think it needs to go up a paragraph.
*chap 3 '...Lucifer's sword against the exposing the jugular vein.' - the exposing the?
chap 5 '..his liver socked his stomach, hard and blood..' - comma after hard? eg 'socked his stomach hard, and blood..'
'And I just what effect ripping it out of you would have.' And i just what effect?
chap 12 'Dean's mind was to occupied to recognize fear' - too
chap 12 'it whirling, whirling' - 'it was whirling, whirling?'
Can't wait to read more. You're so good. _
| firefly4543 chapter 10 . 8/23/2011
Amazing can't wait to read more.
| xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 12 . 6/26/2010
Oh, wow. :O Excellent, though!
| Corrode chapter 3 . 5/23/2010
loved the whole Dean trying to escape thing, made me smile...it was soooooDean-Corrode
| Corrode chapter 2 . 5/23/2010
oh ur so bad in a good way of course-I feel for Sam's manipulaytion from the demons and poor Cas I just want to hug...darnit but I can't seem to look away...great job-I'm twisting in knots here...lol-Corrode
| Corrode chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
Feel sorry for Cas but I love me some major angst-this is written quiet well. On to see how things fair-Corrode
| EsScaper chapter 12 . 4/22/2010
I just found your work and I've become totally obsessed with it. You are brilliant! I swear you had my heart pounding out of my chest...thought I'd have a heart attack due to the intensity of your writing!
The way you interjected biblical writings into Cas's dialog was so smooth and natural. It brought your work to a whole new level. I can't express how much I loved this! Of course your treatment of our beloved Cas was beyond tragic and absolutely heart-wrenching! You bring out such strong emotions in your readers. It is a testament to your talent as a writer.
Of course the ending of this story had me screaming at my monitor! Thank God you have a sequel written. I only pray that it is completed. I will surely be glued to my PC for the duration. I can not be pulled away from the universe that you've created.
Thank you for sharing your incredible talent with this reader! I am thrilled that I stumbled across your work, and I will be an avid follower from now on.