Reviews for Deterioration of Reason
waitingforAslan chapter 2 . 3/22/2017
What? Ruby is driving the Impala? Oh, no, she doesn't! Sam must really be out of his head to let that happen!
Genesis chapter 11 . 7/31/2016
NOOOOO! How could you do this to me!? :p LOL
deadone1013 chapter 2 . 1/2/2016
O, no! You can't! Sam will hurt Cas. I can't believe it.
Well written! Thank you!
Snovolovac chapter 12 . 11/7/2015
i have no words to express how brilliant i find this gem. i would love to post a massive review, but I belive there's a sequal awaiting to be read, favoured, breathed, deavoured. ahem. pardon. I really loved it, every single second. you're awesome
Superpocalypse chapter 12 . 10/4/2015
Oh lord, that was so amazing! I literally could not stop reading till the end.
Sari Dark chapter 12 . 2/2/2015
You are an amazing writer! Though it is a bit frightening how much pleasure you seem to get from the torture...I can't wait to read more!
Crying. hARD chapter 12 . 12/2/2014
This made me feel true feels. True feels.
Kameru chapter 2 . 5/20/2014
Gah! Sammy! How dare you! And to my little Cas too!
Guest chapter 12 . 1/25/2013
That was a wonderful story. Couldn't stop reading it from beginning to end. So addicting. Poor Cas :( poor Gabriel. Can't wait to read more in the following story. :)
localishdreamer chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
You seem to like hurting poor Cas... And I love it! The show needs more Cas whump :/
Guest chapter 12 . 7/4/2012
Poor Cas :(

You are really good! You should really write books for a living! I loved your writing!
My name is a Mystery chapter 12 . 5/4/2012
You should've added ''Tragedy'' to the nice story although I don't think that Cas in his current state(a dead COMPLETELY torn apart...thing)wil be easy resurrecting xD
Timey Wimey chapter 6 . 1/15/2012
Oh God, I hate Belial!
dragoness simplicity chapter 12 . 12/17/2011
OMG! The ending! Wha.. Why... O


Anywho, it was a great story. I did find myself skipping quickly through chapters 7-8. The theme was a little too repeditive for me. But then again, I'm not much of a drama fan. So you must really be a good writer to hold my attention for so long XD

Here are some more annoying little notes, since you seem to looove feedback so much P

*Chap 1 You have a separation line before 'They pulled apart to gasp for air and Ruby smirked..' I think it needs to go up a paragraph.

*chap 3 '...Lucifer's sword against the exposing the jugular vein.' - the exposing the?

chap 5 '..his liver socked his stomach, hard and blood..' - comma after hard? eg 'socked his stomach hard, and blood..'

'And I just what effect ripping it out of you would have.' And i just what effect?

chap 12 'Dean's mind was to occupied to recognize fear' - too

chap 12 'it whirling, whirling' - 'it was whirling, whirling?'

Can't wait to read more. You're so good. _
firefly4543 chapter 10 . 8/23/2011
Amazing can't wait to read more.
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