|Reviews for Shakugan no Shana: Eternal Alliance|
| XxX-Mecha chapter 23 . 12/4/2009
It's a well-detailed story.
I'm sad for Kazumi's death, yet it seems that she has influenced much for the whole alliance to take.
Please update soon.
| Stiama chapter 23 . 12/3/2009
Great story, I am a really big fan now (even though you don't own Shakugan no Shana XD) I like how you have the story grow bigger and bigger. Lastly I want to ask if you are continuing to make the third installment, because it sounds to me that this may be the last.
| HeroGuardian chapter 23 . 12/3/2009
Those dreams were difficult for each of them, but things aren't over yet. This arc was written at a whole new level than the others, mainly because of the impact from the death of Kazumi. Well done.
| CapoExecutor chapter 23 . 12/3/2009
Almost out of the woods.
I very much enjoyed the dream-like trials among Yuji, Shana, and Hecate in finding their way to each other while defeating their worst nightmares.
Si vis pacem, para bellum.
| kei-chama chapter 23 . 12/3/2009
At first, I was joyful, then the part where I reached the nightmare, I was stuffed with tears. Truly a surprise.
And the other Crimson Lords were a great surprise too. This chapter is one of the shockers.
Yet another enemy resides...or an ally?
The more, the better, so please update soon. Good luck for the next ones.
*Keep up the good work* *thumbs up*
| BlahHEAD chapter 23 . 12/2/2009
True synchronization's full potential...
Those memorable quotes from Kazumi are quite touching, and sad...
Yuji's dream got me lost at first, but it was necessary for transition from dream to nightmare. Lol at Shana's dream. All of the nightmares are written really well, definitely the worst fear of each one of the true trinity.
Looks like the "resurrected" are going to do something soon and my guess is that the mysterious entity is with the bunch.
| BlahHEAD chapter 22 . 11/23/2009
Kazumi's death is sad, even though I don't like Kazumi very much... Loss is always painful, but that's life.
Keep up the good writing!
| ColinatorGX chapter 22 . 11/21/2009
I... I'm really sad right now, for Kazumi's death, however, I'm am astounded for your writing genius. To actually manage to ignore attachment to a character that was wonderfully developed, and kill her for the sake of the story and realism, immortalizing her her death with a final crowning moment of awesomeness... that takes courage (for several reasons, which include rampaging fans). It takes a very deep connection with one's story. You just took another step into the making of a great story.
Rest in peace Kazumi, you will not be forgotten. ;)
| kei-chama chapter 22 . 11/19/2009
Go, JohnPeacekeeper! All hail _
the story's getting serious now
once again, nice chappie XD
| Rickmer chapter 22 . 11/18/2009
A very sad chapter.
Still, excellent writing.
| Mikeru-D chapter 22 . 11/18/2009
No hate, just loss.
| INACTIVE2011 chapter 22 . 11/18/2009
No one hates you. Looks like the Yoshida line bears witness to the parents outliving their daughter. Very tragic.
The mysterious resurrection arc from earlier: Has there been any closure on that yet?
| HeroGuardian chapter 22 . 11/18/2009
I had a feeling that they would counter and it seems that they've paid for jumping straight in when it seemed that their enemies were weak. There was an awesome battle between Shana and Yoshimistsu, but Khamsin and Kazumi took heavy damage. Now that Yuji has arrived and the Mouth of Power has called for a retreat, I wonder how will the war play out from here...
| CapoExecutor chapter 22 . 11/18/2009
A good yet bitter chapter.
Well, that's the nature of war. Kinda makes me wonder on how Kazumi's parents will cope with their daughter's death.
Anyways, the fight scenes continue to impress me.
| CapoExecutor chapter 21 . 11/17/2009
Ah, they've reached the eye of the storm but a lot of things can go wrong even with the plans. Still, it'll be interesting to see on how the three groups adapt to the ever-changing situations. Anyone on the enemy sides using negative power of existence?