|Reviews for After Midnight|
| bread and coal chapter 2 . 9/27/2009
the cynicism! i LOVE it. it's a bit choppy but that fits, somehow. those last four lines are perfect.
| bread and coal chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
oh /hell/ yes. i so want to see more poetry from you. this is amazing. i love the whole thing, but i think my favorite lines were: the hearts filled with–/well, something./She doesn't know exactly/But does she need to?