Reviews for One of Us chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
I always thought the junk lady scary.

Very good.
troubledatheart chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
haha i was not expecting that ending..this was a really good idea for a story i really liked it. well done
Charmshadow chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
Oh my Goddess, great minds think alike! that the EXACT thing I thought the junk lady was going to do! I always thought the junk room scene was the creepiest in the movie for some reason. THAT freaked me out, nice job ;). chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
It was kinda scary cus i thought exactly the same xD

I liek your stile of writing was realy caught up *my english got worser .
Tsukare chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
I wasn't sure who I was expecting the intruder to be, but the Junk Lady played the role well. During the movie I thought the Junk Lady's intentions were more to distract Sarah from remembering Toby, but I certainly agree that Sarah was beginning to look like a (cleaner) version of the Junk Lady.

I don't read a lot of horror either, but I think you did a nice job. :) The story made me tense, and the ending was properly disturbing. Interesting read.