Reviews for Lords of Nature
Fire lord 626 chapter 8 . 7/19/2013
Reread it, love it, continue Legacy
Sailor Pandabear chapter 8 . 8/10/2011
XxX-Mecha chapter 8 . 12/4/2009
Hmm...Leanan-sidhe and Khamsin? It's not a bad idea.

Nice spinoff.
ColinatorGX chapter 8 . 7/1/2009
I really enjoyed this story, especially the emphasis on Kashim and Leanan's feelings, motivations, and growing affections and relationship.

Really liked the story, the plot, and the way it fits into the storyline of SnS: Eternal Destiny.

Now i just hope they can get back in time.
Doublebend chapter 8 . 6/30/2009
Well, that was fast. I CAN READ QUICKLY! *stares up at ceiling with sparkling eyes, worshipping some god or another*

Ahem. That was a kinda touvhing story. Great entrance with Shana, Hecate and Yuji! I feel REALLY sorry for Lorelei, now, and I was just starting to like her...poor girl.

But also poor, weak Khamsin. I just love it when authors show us another side of my favourite characters like that.

GOOD READING. I shouldn't have slacked off like that. And here I am wishing that I had read it earlier, but things were rather hectic for a few weeks (and now I'm in the summer hols, I won't be allowed to touch the computer...(ToT)

Final words...I love it! Thank you, for all that, you are the best!

If I ever write any stories on Shakugan no Shana (and I will definitely, most likely, quite possible, still unsure about it, include Khamsin) then pleasepleaseplease read it. Although I'm working on something else right now, and not being as multitalented, multitasking as you are, will pobably take until I'm FORTY to finish it. And I'm still at school. I've learnt a lot from your stories, great characterisations and plots, but my last two stories I tried to upload was deleted by the 60 days thingy...I will promise to use from now on...

Anyway, please keep on writing! This must be the longest review I've ever written, but it's so totally worth it! Thank you!
Doublebend chapter 5 . 6/30/2009
Aww, the two are fighting. How cute!

...I'm the devil...

Another really good chapter. WAAH! you finished it! Must hurry up and read...*bangs face really near the screen*

I feel kinda sorry for LS. but I'm also glad that both of them seemed to learn something! That's one more thing I love about your stories, they've got so much depth...

Must-read-the-rest! QUICKLY!
INACTIVE2011 chapter 8 . 6/28/2009
Awesome story. Would have been nice if he actually kept the lance as a keepsake and not use it in battle instead of throwing it into the sea.
CapoExecutor chapter 8 . 6/28/2009
Definitely enjoyed reading this work. Seems like a trend for Crimson gods to establish a utopia with good intentions but intolerable methods. I wonder what Alastor's plan would have been like if he had joined the club.
ColinatorGX chapter 7 . 6/21/2009
Thats an interesting development, i didn'0t see that coming. So Gaia is a traitorous idiot. Hm... I hope nothing bad happens to Khashim and Leanan.

Great story so far
CapoExecutor chapter 7 . 6/16/2009
I'm very touched at what goes on between Leanan-sidhe and Khamsin such that I hope to see more between them. I kinda wish Lorelei had some last words for an epitaph or had found her own peace.

Well, onwards to the next opponent!
ColinatorGX chapter 6 . 6/6/2009
Amazing climax here to the fight! Though i'm curious as to what Levihathan's true from would be. Would you have portraited him as a sea serpent, as some biblical and historical references say, or a diffrent one?

I say, this story has me caught up )
Doublebend chapter 3 . 5/25/2009
I am SO sorry I didn't read this earlier! (I didn't realise you updated this so quickly. Normally, I encourage my fav writers to update more often- and for some reason, they never do- but I might as well shut up this time :]) So, my two favourite Shana characters were fighting like little children while I was away, were they? And Khamsin knows nothing about women. Shame on him, but I still think it's cute that he doesn't! - Total obsession alert

And now he's fighting a bit of a tough battle. ...Yeah, I always wanted to comment on that aim of his. I also want to do something about this half- baked fanfiction sitting somewhere in my desktop for a while (also about Khamsin, but I am TOO EFFING LAZY TO GET ON WITH IT! Someone help me snap out of it!

Will read the rest! The good thing about having so many chapters waiting for me to read is that I don't have to tear my hair out while waiting for the author to update. If they even plan to. But I have all faith in you!

“Just a moment ago, you were this old geezer in a boy’s body.”Gave me some shivers, after thinking too deeply on this line. I like to think that Khamsin is a young, cool- looking boy- although living hundreds or thousands of years and never getting a girlfriend is also a good point.- Totally insane point alert

Keep updati- oh, wait, I said I'll shut up. Anyway, as some people may have realised by now, if I wrote such a long and annoying review like this means that I am tired but am eager to read the rest of this story, though it is unlikely I will show my face here for another couple of months to review again. BTW, srry Johnnyboy, but I only got one manga pic of LS, and I don't really know how to work my [broken and retarted]scanner- seeing as it had been sitting in my room for FIVE YEARS without me noticing it. so,, see ya.
Markal chapter 5 . 5/17/2009
Well, just as I thought: Leviathan wasn't giving Leanan-sidhe the Lawbreaker out of any altruistic motives. Too bad.

It seems that everything's escalating to a head. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter with great anticipation!
ColinatorGX chapter 5 . 5/15/2009
Finally together. Took them a while for their feelings to become obvious to themselves. I actually quite like the way you portrait these different sides of them.

Im rumbling with excitment for what Leviathan has in store for Khashim.
Markal chapter 4 . 5/12/2009
Getting more and more interesting. For some weird reason, I'm surprised and yet I'm not surprised by the fact that Leviathan has the Lawbreaker. Only question in my head now is whether or not he has some sort of ulterior motive for letting Leanan-sidhe have it.

The ending seemed a little... truncated, even for a cliffhanger. Oh well. Keep at it! Can't wait to see how this story turns out in the end.
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