|Reviews for Start Swimming: Breathing Soul|
| JoPo08 chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
I liked this story a lot! Now I have to listen to the song.
I also liked how you gave Alphonse an excuse for sitting next to the river all the time.
| minieclair chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
Truely amazing I loved this it's a fav hands down
| Griselda Banks chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
This was really good too! Really sweet and heartfelt, and filled with that same cold fear at the beginning. You did a really good job; I liked it a lot.
Keep up the good work!
| Arctic Bee chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
Wow...this is just amazing.
You caught Al's character very well with this one shot... I could see him in the water with these thoughts. And I think him having his body back at the end of the story just adds to the mystery.
The song looks really good also (:
| RoyalKnightX chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
Poor Al. /
But it's ok! Because Ed's there and he's safe! Hehe, like I said yesterday, Ed wouldn't be so angry if he didn't love Al so much! His reaction at the end was priceless.
"You'll be lucky if I ever let you near water ever again!" xD
Great one, bro!