Reviews for Uninterrupted
Beast-Master-Mel chapter 3 . 4/17/2010
Awesome so far. I want to know what Skuld is going to do to Urd for breaking her ice cream clock. lol
WkCIA chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
Here's a translation from what I know of Latin:

Happiness, when friends are together

Sadness, when all your friends together suffer pain

Through struggles is the happy life

The cause of all life (is) to find, to believe, the great moment

(when) the doors are opening

the doors are opening

It is time

It's quite literal, so it may not "flow" as nicely as it should.
omegarulesall chapter 3 . 12/22/2009
lol at the ending. Keep up the great work.
Chownz chapter 2 . 12/14/2009
Yes its a nice song, I own the movie pity though they didn't use the same voice actors from the series! Nice start to your story, hope to see the next chapter... Ka kite
Deathmvp chapter 3 . 12/3/2009
The boat scean was great in this chapter and Skuld with the clock had me LOL.
Shadowhunter536 chapter 2 . 7/14/2009
great story. i wish you would continue it
darkstaryfire chapter 2 . 6/20/2009
this vi
amphys chapter 2 . 5/8/2009
Try checking & improving your grammar, especially your tenses. In cases like this, it may not seem how you mean things to be.
Archon Dragon chapter 2 . 5/4/2009
Wow, this is a lot better than the original, and the original was already good. Great job!
omegarulesall chapter 2 . 5/1/2009
wow, a really good story. hope you update soon.
Kiko-Yuri chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
I thought it is quite fabulous how you actually change your story from the original version. I thought it is interesting and had certainly striked me with the point. I really do like the imagery that you display with your words and I am hoping forward into reading your next chapter of this story.

Keep up with the good work, Otakon1Snake-san!
Berlitz1 chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
I like your story so far, but there is one little mistake:

Onii-san means "elder brother", the correct word for "elder sister" is Onee-san.
SkoRn3d chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
Woohoo! I got a shout out! Nah, well you know what I think of this chapter so yeah ...

Your yaoi-loving Beta

Ja ne
Brocky chapter 2 . 4/2/2009
I wonder if Urd's reasearch will consist of Friday the 13th. Anyways a good chapter.
Deathmvp chapter 2 . 4/2/2009
Intresting start to the story. I look foward to reading more.
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