Its a tragedy this remains unfinished. You write a fantastic darkward and im saving this just in case you find your muse again.

I really like your story!

I would love if you continue this story.
It is perfect

Hey hey Miss Lara... sooo... I remember beta'ing some of these chaps for ya... you ever coming back to this? Ever since COVID hit and Midnight Sun came out, I've been revisiting old pleasures and trying to entice some of my favorite writers to come back and join me in completing unfinished works. I never posted much myself, but I had about 7 or 8 diff fics that I started, planned, never posted, and never finished. I've made it my new current outlet again. I know the fandom is pretty much dead, but these fics are still enjoyable as ever, and I would REALLY love to know where you were taking this GEM. Miss all the fine ladies I became acquainted with back then. Hope I can entice you back for a bit as well! Love, JO!

omg i love this its crazy

No no no u can't leave it there im desperate for me im loving it. I became obsessed with fanfiction after my obsession with the vampire diaries I didn't know it existed til I found out by accident after watching that for the 3rd time an then i realised it was out there for almost everything an discovered twiliight fanfiction an I've read alot but I have to admit ure writing is by far 1 of the best I've ever read u should write erotic fiction as a career it flows it's believable an hot

It is nice that for once (!), Paul is NOT the pack hothead! That "Run, Bambi, run!" line was Priceless .

It’s been close to ten years since I’ve read this, yet it’s of a handful I remembered. Though vague recollections, the few titles in ye old memory banks, were amazingly well written whether canon or non, portrayed the outline of the characters similarly but with variation. I’ve been out of the Twihole until fate and a pandemic made me pick up Meyers book...and here I am making the rabbit hole round. Can’t wait to revisit this story. Thank you for the story. Like others, I’m sure, I hope you also fall down the Twihole to be inspired enough to continue with these characters.

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More please

More please.

I looked at the dates in the header and realized that it had been a really long time since you were able to post. I hope you will be able to again soon as I really love this story and would love to have more of it. It is pretty unique and very interesting. I hope life is treating you well and that you know what a good writer you are. Best wishes, Sue.

I really don't like how arrogant Edward is. It seems so undeserved too. Like, what does he have to be arrogant about? Hes not even a man.

Please continue I love it it’s amazing!